The Montique Legacy: CHAPTER 4
Ninja:
Warning: Picture quality isn't so great. You'll be able to see walls that are down, the sky, plumbbobs, etc.
Story quality isn't the best either. There really isn't a major plot or an important message in this story. The storyline is based on what happened in-game, with minor changes.
Taneesha Montique, a popularity sim, was rich and popular. She got everything that she wanted. Until one tragic day, her house caught on fire, losing everything. She was poor and homeless. Feeling sorry for her, her neighbours decided to help her out by giving her one of their properties.
When she arrived, she realised that not only was the property bare, but it was a town completely filled with Maxis items, Maxis clothes, and Maxis townies!
How will Taneesha cope?
The Montique Legacy
Chapter 1
Chapter 2
Chapter 3
Chapter 4
Extra Info:
Chapter 1
Edited Chapter 1. Added title and centred everything. Let me know if you prefer it not centred.
Chapter 2
Sorry about its shortness!
Chapter 3
Is finally here!
Chapter 4
Has arrived after several month's absence!
The neighbourhood has no CC apart from the CC on Taneesha, Taneesha's hair in a couple other colours, default skins and default eyes.
Comments
Thanks for your comments everyone! I would write this in a separate post, but that would either involve double posting, or posting the thanks before Chapter 2, and I don't really like adding extra comments that aren't relevant to the story in the story post. I know legacies are hard to keep up, and hopefully I can keep this one up!
Ninja:
Chapter 1
Meet the Founder
Yeah, this is me, Taneesha Montique.
And this is my dog, Sasha.
Recently my house burned down. Everything that I have ever worked for went with it. So now I'm dirt poor. My next door neighbours felt sorry for me.
They gave me some property in some far away town that I had never heard of. So I went there and had a look.
The place looked pretty bleak. 'My house better be good' I thought to myself. I checked the mail-box to see how close to my house I was. But on the mail-box was the address of the property that my neighbours gave me.
"WHAT?!?!?!" I screamed.
This couldn't be my house, there was nothing! I was extremely mad, this could NOT be happening.
My neighbours could've let me live with them for awhile, but nooo they had to give me a pile of grass! Oh, and a tree. A tree! What could I possibly do with a tree?
People that had felt sorry for me had given me a little bit of money, and I had this built.
I know, a fridge, bed, shower and toilet in the same room, disgusting!
Then visitors came to welcome me to the 'neighbourhood'. You should've seen them! Ug-a-lay! First there was Brandi Whats-her-name.
And some Melissa chick or something.
And this guy, I don't even remember his name, and I don't want to.
Seriously, what's with the kilt?
And Benjamin Long. I had to try to stop myself from calling him Benjamin Long-Nose.
What? People actually want to kiss her? Oh yeah, everyone here is ugly so their standards are lower.
What is it with all the Maxis clothes? Is it the only brand here? Does that mean that I'm either going to have to wear this dress for the rest of my life or buy... MAXIS CLOTHES! NOOOO!
Sasha had a fight with some little dog.
And the little dog won!
I'm so ashamed!
I took my eye of the visitors for one second, and one of them wrecked my bed!
Then they decided to have a fight! Nice to know everyone is so friendly here!
So I told them all to leave. I'm not having any anti-social rude ugly Maxis-wearing freaks at my... house-type-thing.
I had to eat an Instant Meal because I couldn't make anything else.
I looked for a job.
The one that paid me the most money was a military job. Eww.
And I had to sleep standing up. Gross.
Sasha got a job, too. Hers is in Show Business, a lot more glamorous than my job.
Thinking that she hadn't caused enough trouble already, Melissa What's-Her-Name came back to my house.
I didn't go outside and say hello (do you blame me?) and she stood outside for hours waiting. What a loser!
Eventually I managed to find my dream job, well, kind of. I want to become a Celebrity Chef, but I had to start at the bottom. A dirty dish washer. Eww. And my pay was a lot less, too.
What a horrible uniform!
I got a job promotion, yay!
I managed to get a new bed, oven and stereo (and a table for it to sit on).
But it wasn't long until I got a demotion.
It was that Landgraab kid's fault.
But Sasha and I kept working and I managed to get a TV and chair.
A toilet right next to a chair? Eww!
I managed to get wallpaper and carpet.
And a painting set and bookcase.
I'm still waiting for someone to tell me that this is all a joke, and my real house is waiting for me. It has to be a joke.
Will Taneesha wake up and discover that this is all a joke? Will she be able to escape all the horrible Maxis Sims that break her stuff? Will Sasha ever become tough enough to win a fight against a tiny dog? Will Taneesha ever become rich again? You might just find out in the next chapter!
Mariella:
what a great start, cant wait till the next chapter x x x
scottfish:
Nice start. Keep it up legacies are hard.
Ninja:
Chapter 2
Facing Reality
It's not a joke.
How could this happen to me?
I have to live in this crummy 'house'.
This sucks.
To make matters even worse, I saw a freaky dog with glowing eyes!
I have to clean stuff.
Major eww.
I managed to kinda have another room added onto my 'house'.
And another!
Everyone is sooo ugly here. I mean, look at this guy!
Sasha reached the top of her career! Yay!
$737 a day, alright!
My 'house' so far. I'm getting there.
Err, not really.
My boss told me that I had to become more creative to get a promotion. Pfft. I'm incredibly creative, duh!
Now, this is what I kinda call a house.
Kinda.
Will Taneesha be able to buy a bigger house? Will the freaky dog get his eyes checked? Will the ugly Sims get their face fixed? Will Sasha stay at the top of her career? Will Taneesha get a job promotion? You might just find out in the next chapter!
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