Every Family Has Its Secrets
Astral Faery:
Oy - four stories if you count my Avalon legacy, 3 kids, 2 babysitting kids, 4 cats, plus multitudes of stories that I need to read - but thankfully BLD is nearly done so I forged ahead with this one. I actually started working on this before I even started BLD, but pushed it aside. So it's been calling me back pretty hard, lol. I'm happy you don't mind the extra click. I hope others feel the same way. :)
discowhipped:
Well, this is an Astral Faery story so of COURSE I'm going to read it!
Victoria is beautiful, well all the characters are.
And it is brilliant, the writing is very emphatic, I wanted to cry when Erik smashed her dollhouse! How could he do that?! Just when Bradley was making progress. Stupid chauvanistic Erik. >:[
And no, I don't mind the extra click. ^_^
ghettoblaster:
wow that is brilliant! you are a really talanted writer ;)
that dad kinda impersonates all the things i really dislike in certain men/people
Astral Faery:
Thanks, disco! I'm so glad you read and enjoyed it. This will hopefully be a little easier to shoot than BLD since it's a real life story instead of a fantasy! I'm really glad you checked it out. Erik is, pure and simple, a big jerk. He can't handle the fact that his family is changing and he has no control over it. He can't deal with a child with special needs. Not in his family. That kind of thing never happens to the VanDorens - always the poor family in some other town. And sadly, he gets much, much worse!
ghetto - thank you! Both for taking the time to read and to comment. I really appreciate it. I'm a little braver starting a new story than I was last year, but there is always some uncertainty involved - wondering if people will accept it. I'm happy you enjoyed it.
Zorom:
Oh my go. Child abuse. He's going to murder the baby! And abuse Victoria! Then her mom! And then Clinton! Her mom will commit suicide and And Victoria gets horrible bruises and...and...social worker comes, Yay!
Ahem. Sorry. School tommorow. Don't like school. Argh.
Sorry, four stories then! But that reminds me, you haven't updated on the legacy either... >:D
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