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gumdrop Rain:
Re-arranged First Post; First Chapter Farther Down
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I've been playing sims and writing for .... years, so it's only logical I put the two together. The main character of this situation is a secondary character I never thought I'd elaborate on - but I fell in love with her, so I decided she would be the focus of my first sim story, a little tale about her personal life.
Mother of one, conflicting with herself, trying to bury the past where it belongs - behind her. Andrae O'Mackey is one woman who could keep the world wondering, dangling from her fingertips. Lovely, independent, compassionate, lively, creative, passionate and unstable, she's hard to resist and even more of a challenge to get close to. Everyone, however, needs a shoulder to lay their head on and a friend to hold them up, and not even Andrae can deny that ... So what happens when that shoulder and friend come in the form of her deceased husband's brother?
Chapter List--Play List
Chapter One [First Page] ~ Here Without You - 3 Doors Down
Chapter Two - [First Page] ~ My Sacrifice - Creed
dark_jean:
Very interesting poses... ;D!!! looking forward to the next update :D
twinklelilstar:
So I was FORCED to comment, seriously the author blackmailed me (so beware!) As best friend, I suppose I have to review this though...
Those are some pretty odd poses...and why the heck are they on the FLOOR? There's a bed right there...silly author. Of course she intended for the readers to understand her logic, which is pretty messed up. (She assumed the readers would get that fooling around on the floor instead of a comfy bed is a very 'Drae' thing to do.) What is with the random piano? I thought they were on honeymoon? Why would there be a piano in a honeymoon suite?
I like the dialogue, it flows like a normal conversation would and it's not strained or forced at all. The pictures are also done VERY well. LOVE the poses, well the non-questionable ones. :D Overall I can't wait for the next chapter...(so hurry it up missy!)
Ruffnut:
only comment about pictures is, I suggest you raise walls.
other then that, me likes so far :)
gumdrop Rain:
Thanks you guys <3 I'm working on chapter two~
~@Kyle-Best advice ever, thanks. I didn't realize until after I'd posted the chapter that I hadn't raised the walls back up from positioning .... So you can see the rest of the unfurnished house xD
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