Ava (added chapter 8)
			Katie:
			So before I continue I’m Already There, I’d like to get in some “practice”- the kind of “practice” theraven had with Anna’s Diary, a shorter story…
Ava
2010
Things change. People die. Babies are born. It seems as though the great circle of life cannot be broken. At least, this is the thought of a typical healthy child, with a typical healthy family. Not me. 
   See, in my house, nothing changes. Everything is the same. I get sick, while my brothers stay healthy. It is inevitable. I am only twelve years old, but wise beyond my age. 
   “Ava? Are you okay?” Aidan says sounding panicked. 
   My face is quite a site; flushed, with blood gushing down from my left nostril.
   “I am fine Aidan!” I shout. His willingness to help is annoying, and he has caught me at the wrong moment. “Get out of my room! And don’t you dare tell mom!” 
   Aidan covers his mouth with his hand, shakes his head, and turns to race down the hall. 
   I rip another small shred of fabric from my makeshift curtain that is really a sheet and dabbing my nose with it I sop up all the blood. Underneath the blood, my skin is stained pink once more. 
…
   “How are you?”  My mother asks at dinner, “Do you feel feverish?” 
   “I’m fine mom.” I scowl. Just then, Taylor looks up. I give him a demon glare as a warning not to tell. 
   Aidan looks at Taylor, then to the floor. 
   “I’m not liable to say anything.” He grumbles.
   I stare into my plate, and shove a forkful of spaghetti into my mouth.
…
Find and re-read chapter four  here 
		
			Stinkerbella:
			This sounds like it'll end up making me cry like a baby!  :'(  lol Can't wait to read what you have in store.  ;D
		
			Katie:
			Wow, a four lin prologue ad I've already got one comment! How exciting!  :D  I'm writing/taking pictures for the first chapter already ;) 
It might...  >:D Haha! 
		
			Stinkerbella:
			LOL! *grabs kleenex* I'll be ready.  ;D
		
			Katie:
			:D That made me REALLY happy... but I write stories that are medical and sad- like theraven, but my writing styles are a bit different- so prepare :D
		
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