Undead: Serene's story ~The end~
Queen_Maddi:
Whoa! That was awsome Lolipop! I hope you're able to write more! you've got heaps of talent! :)
♥Maddi♥
ladyrose:
(eeery voice) I will you to write mooooreeeee!!!!!!!!
heh. man that story is so great! its taken me like an hour to read all the way through! Serene and Victor should totally get it on at the end!
-----excuse my filthy mind!
Lollipop_Girl:
Lol that comment made me laugh ladyrose! Well....bloody kitchens are *so* romantic :D those two sure love eachother,three bolts of chemistry!
Thanks for reading guys :)
Queen_Maddi:
No problem it was worth my presious time lol!
hotrod50s:
wow is about all i can say and was disappointed when i ran out of story to read lol.well put together plenty of pics and suspense leaving us hanging like that.
i read every last word looking for a catch or a loop or something lol(typos never count)i agree with whoever said write it all out and sell it as a book you have a buyer right here.
i'm sure if you keep this up others will also.
btw how did you get the blood to show?ihaven't seen any except for some skins but oh well nevermind that lol it will spoil the story.big congrats on this story,i really enjoy see the talent displayed on this site,,and makes me really wonder why they call it "just a game"
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