Undead: Serene's story ~The end~

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~Angel~:
I have just finished the story, and I gota say....Wow, its really good :) I really enjoyed reading it

meedle:
that was good, and I don't think the romantic part was awkward, I feel that way while writing too. You just can't go into detail. That was very good, I can't wait to hear what Serene does. She should take the knife and kill herman, or bite him or something lol.

meedle:
wait lol, didn't see the last bit. srry lol.

meedle:
Just finished. Wow. Five Stars. You could like publish this as a short story (without the sim pics obviously). Its a great story, even without the sims. In reflection, I think that Serene made the right choice by turning Victor. Awesome work Lolli! That was very satisfying!

Lollipop_Girl:
Thanks guys :) Its so nice to see I get comments here too. Thanks for reading!

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