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Author Topic: Undead: Serene's story ~The end~  (Read 49600 times)
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Shaak Ti
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« Reply #90 on: January 24, 2007, 07:25:50 pm »
its kinda creapy emo. not to afend but its not my thing. i prefer the simple happy story unlike the sad stories like the thread i started. no happiness at all mah ha ha ha ha haaaaaa ..... i mean oh dear thats to bad!
 
made me think of the exersit
 
so i cried
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« Reply #91 on: January 25, 2007, 01:40:15 pm »
Quote from: Shaak Ti;543823
its kinda creapy emo. not to afend but its not my thing. i prefer the simple happy story unlike the sad stories like the thread i started. no happiness at all mah ha ha ha ha haaaaaa ..... i mean oh dear thats to bad!
 
made me think of the exersit
 
so i cried
1) If you want to criticise, please write in full English words so that everyone understands. I don't really get what you've just said.
2) If you don't like a genre, why do you send gratuitous mean remarks? Why did you read it in the first place?
3) This story isn't bad and you may make the author think it is. It's featured on another site, mind you.
4) You didn't read the story correctly. There's humour, but it must be too subtle for you to detect it. Is smiled a lot while reading it, but it seems you just felt like making someone sad today.
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« Reply #92 on: January 25, 2007, 02:22:13 pm »
That was brilliant!!! I loved it!!! I read it start to finnish!!!

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« Reply #93 on: February 03, 2007, 03:45:55 am »
:worship: Thank you for your story, and you wonderful talent.  Whew!! long time, but way excellent read...and your storyboard picture were very well done.
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« Reply #94 on: February 10, 2007, 06:09:50 pm »
great story I loved it!
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« Reply #95 on: March 30, 2007, 03:52:34 pm »
Seriously, if you stop writing, I'll start crying. At first I was reading it because of the vampire things but then I got sucked into the story and have one thing to say : IT WAS BRILLIANT!!!! Seriously, you are very talented and should become an author.
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« Reply #96 on: April 04, 2007, 03:19:00 pm »
totally awesome! i got worried for a sec that she didnt bite victor...that woulda made me sad Cry
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« Reply #97 on: July 05, 2007, 10:45:47 pm »
Great story!  You left us at a real cliff-hanger of a spot.  I really DO think you could make a living selling these as books.  (of course, you would need permission from Maxis.)
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« Reply #98 on: July 06, 2007, 02:14:41 pm »
Smiley Thanks, that's so nice of you. Well if I ever convert my story I would just remove any sim-references Wink

I appreciate feedback and I am glad people still read my story even though I finished it last year Smiley
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« Reply #99 on: July 07, 2007, 09:05:51 am »
omg this story is amazing!
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« Reply #100 on: July 24, 2007, 03:59:42 pm »
I love your story!! It reminds me so much of the trilogy: twilight, eclipse and new moon by stephenie meyer.

That book was all I could think about for weeks and gave me chills each time I thought about like every 5 minutes - If you read it you wont be dissapionted.

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« Reply #101 on: July 25, 2007, 02:34:23 pm »
please and please and most please try and create another story. Like horror and romance and love and family tradegies and mostly like serenes story except better and better and I want to hear and see it soon. I loved it and is telling everyone I know about it. If I do not hear another story like that I will got kaboom!:blob6:try to do a sequel
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« Reply #102 on: September 07, 2007, 03:25:54 am »
Wow, I have been in France for seven weeks and I come back to see I have comments Smiley you guys rock I don't get many comments anymore on S2C where I also posted this story because i finished it last summer tongue

Well while away I began writing a new story of the same genre (horror with touches of comedy and romance) and I'll be posting it here too. I just need to figure out how to use GIMP layering before I start typing it onto the PC so I can stage some of my more complicated photos. I don't like to over-photo-edit but sometimes it has to be done to stage something *sigh*.

Thanks for the interest guys! Smiley You've all made my day.
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« Reply #103 on: August 01, 2008, 02:31:15 pm »
i luv ur awsome story plz give me links to more of ur storys plz!!!!!!!!!!!
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« Reply #104 on: August 04, 2008, 08:20:42 pm »
Wow...I wrote this in 2006 and I thought it'd be long forgotten by now! Cheesy Ok I am  very late to reply but thanks angelrock444!
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Why beeing a teenage vampire can really suck! Undead: Serene's story
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