A fathers Sacrifice. The End Tribute added
flid:
for those of you who asked about the kitty tiles ages ago, i found them lol
hello kitty tiles
sorry they are tsr though
One:
FLID, NOOOO! I WAS FEELING SO HAPPY AND THEN MORGAN GOES AND GETS HIT BY A DAMN CAR!! AND ADAM JUST GOES AND THROWS HIMSELF AT A TRAIN! AND LITTLE VANESSA IS WITHOUT PARENTS! CURSE YOU FLID! :crybaby:
...but on a serious note, the story was absolutely moving. I felt tears coming to my eyes when Vanessa and her grandpa were talking in the last update. Poor baby D:
Lifa:
I loved this story. The ending was too sad! :(
Anyways, I was watching the video you put up afterwards... and I don't want to seem too critical, but I do have some wisdom to impart.
-----For your next video, remember the art of cut and clip. Although it's the same scene, it doesn't need to be taken all in one linear shot.
-----When you do camera spins, test it out first. Pause the game and do a couple of test spins to see where they need to be to land in the exact center of the shot. Then, unpause, start action, and spin like crazy. It's a good effect if you can pull it off (and I did see one or two where you had pulled it off rather well).
-----Match the intensity of the song. For the song you were working with, I would've liked to see longer scenes and more fades... it went too quickly.
-----You can never go wrong with atmosphere shots, especially setting suns and rain. Not all of the video always needs to center on a human subject, nor does it need to be centered... you'd be surprised how effective a shot that cuts the subject's face in half can be!
Anyways, long story short, I'd like to work with you if you ever decide to do a video again, you show alot of talent in what you're trying to portray with it... so send a PM sometime.
taniaissimo:
Flid the video was awesome.. one of the best sims vids I have ever seen. great job, I had to laugh tho coz I was using the same song for my charmed video which I finished yesterday. so I totally love your video and the song well the best!!!. I am really looking forward to your next story I have never been into these things but well yours have caught me and I am truly hooked and wait for it all.
Thanx for the hard effort you put into the stories I truly appreciate the entertainment.
Roll on next story.
X x X
PS.. I downloaded the house with Morgan and Adam and the two babies(who on earth is Leigh ?well I moved her out) anyways They are very happy they have jus gotten married with another lil addition due to arrive in 3 sim days hehe.
Thanx Flid for the great stuff.
flid:
Lifa thanks for the advise, I dont take it as critical, more helping me to improve. That was my first time ever making a video with the sims, I actually enjoyed making it. So thanks for the comments and if I make another I know where to come :)
taniaissimo
Sorry I forgot Leigh was in that house, I always have a random sims in my story houses so that I can move the characters in and out without having to re decorate or make sure they have the funds, Leigh is actually an old story sim. :)
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