"My Son" -- Updated 27/12/06 (CH3PII with pics) -- My first sim story!
Sleepycat:
* is waiting.... *
SimulatedDork:
Chapter Two - The First Night - Part II
(Writing as Riley Goth)
“I’m lost…
You’re lost…
We’ve lost each other…
Until tonight.”
Why does Rose have to be such a spoilt, uncaring know-it-all? As if she doesn't love it enough that everybody admires her as the "intelligent twin". So why does she rain on my parade – on the one day I feel happy about my B-? It's not like a get fabulous grades like her everyday!
Anyway, I dart towards our door, ready to nab the telly before Rose does. After all, mum and dad was out with the rest of the family, leaving ME the man of the house! How grand is that title?
So I flop down on the sofa, ready for the BeenyBop Sims to come on.
"Ooh, ooh – Rose, it's coming on! New episodes of Bee-" I began yelling in to nowhere, thinking she'd hear from outside. But before I could finish, the phone rang just as the theme tune was starting! It took all my willpower (a fancy word Rose taught me) to lift my lazy butt off the sofa and catch the phone just before it finished ringing.
"Hello?" I asked anxiously, half keeping an eye on the telly, watching Beeny dance round. I giggled.
"Richard?"
"Richard?" I repeated, distracted by the dancing bunny on T.V. "Oh – no – sorry, wrong number, there's no – "
"No, wait! Richard, Ricky? Not Ricky? Err...River? No...Robert? Raymond? Radlette!"
"Radlette!?" I thought, outraged he would think I could be called such a thing!
"Who is this?" I asked, my suspiscions growing higher.
I could feel the hesitation at the end of the line.
"Hello?" I asked again, unsure whether his was a prank. I sighed when I got no response and was about to hang up.
"Don!" came a sudden voice from the other end. "Don Lothario – I err..."
I froze. Don Lothario...
"No..." I panicked, my heart thumping violently away. "There's no...Don Lothario...no Don Lothario living here." I slammed the phone down, my heart hammering away in my chest. The mindless words he spoke had sent such a shock of adrenaline through me...Don Lothario...
*****
Notes: Creating this story really has made me aware of photography in TS2. Before, a "good snap" was a funny scene caught by pressing the "c" button. It had plumb-bobs, relationship +/-s and the walls were usually down (making things unnecessarily cluttered). Now, I pay much more attention to the details, and you might be able to tell: some of the snaps in Chapter One were taken before I had this great realization! Lol.
SimulatedDork:
Sleepycat - Your wait is over :) Sorry it's not really a big update, but I think where I ended it made it complete ... plus I need time to write the next chapter! -Gah-
Dangermous - Thank you :) Have you written any stories I could check out?
Elven_Song - Yeah, I know, a lot of the pictures in Ch. 1 were taken before I discovered the wonderful "tab" key lol. And I've cleared up some hard drive space, got some CC in so now my pictures will be taken in the best quality.
CynaraBlade - Awr, thanks :) And if you're feeling for her now, then the end should make you cry!
Starlucid - Thank you for your comment, I love the nursery scenes too! And on your thread, you're talking about using the "tab" key, all of the Secret Garden shots were taken using the tab key [free cam]. It's amazing, you
can explore all sorts of new, wonderful angles :D
Missd735 - Thank you, I love your Rags and Riches story!!
oddball011:
OMG my Don is the complete opposite of urs
He actually adopted a little boy and married Cassandra and changed his aspiration lol
I like the prospective of both twins very good!!!!
Sleepycat:
Don married Brandi in my hood, they were a very loving couple up to their death (a day apart and it was so hard to let them go)
*waits for the next part* :lol: no worrys, I know how time consuming it is, I've got 195 screenshots to sort through and get ready so I can update mine.
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