The Box Ending up Now!
starlucid:
Well I'm working on photos for this story it's a good one just need to put up some more visuals I have a lot photos but they are more advanced into the story...
hotrod50s:
i see spaces you left to add pics that i didn't notice before,lot of people complaining about trouble with photobucket lately,working them in later works too i saw 2 that i didn't see earlier if worse comes to worse use sleepycats idea. i'm off to check hers now:)
the pics that are here have great staging in them so i know you can do it.
wow maybe you should give sleepycats idea a try looks good and no worries with photobucket pics look good there too if you do put a link here for us to go see i want to follow this story out to see how it ends
starlucid:
Thanks hotrod. I corrected a software conflict some kind of flash error with photobucket so I guess I just finish this off and maybe for my next story I already have a really good idea ...I might follow sleepycats suggestion my next story has me excited sorry I'm Gemini scatter brain! LOL!
I have an ending for this already but I'm still trying figure out how to pose everybody just right...
starlucid:
Installment Three:
Nurse: Miss Woodhouse! No don't try to get up I will walk you to the rest room!
The nurse walked her to the restroom her body was reeling in pain she felt as if she had been hit all over with a bat she also felt burning on her face.
When the nurse had put her back in bed she began the usual nurse routine of pulse, bloodpressure check and stuck a thermometer in her mouth...
Nurse: You are in Pleasantville hospital I'm your nurse Patty I'm going to finish this and get your doctor he has been waiting for you to wake up Ok?
Rosemary nodded ugh even that hurt....why was she in so much pain she knew she had fallen but she couldn't imagine getting hurt this bad from falling in her own study...
The nurse went to get the Doctor and she looked around the room there were flowers she supposed from Maggy and Ali she wasn't even sure how long she had been there.
The doctor came in and greeted her Ah I am glad to finally meet you fully awake he said....My name is Doctor Roberts and I have been attending you since your attack...
Rosemary: Attack? she gasped
Dr. Roberts: Yes can you remember any details Ms. Woodhouse? The police have asked me to notify them as soon as you were awake and able to speak...
As you can imagine many people in the Pleasantville are concerned about some serial rapist beating and raping it's residents..
Rosemary: I was raped?
Rosemary touched her head to see if somehow she was dreaming some kind of nightmare from hell she felt open wound in the back of her head she felt faint again....she laid back...
Rosemary: I don't remember anything except fainting and a very strange nightmare...
Dr. Roberts: It's ok Rosemary I want you to go ahead and sleep now I will tell the police you are not ready to speak to them about your attack.
Rosemary went into a deep uncomfortable sleep she dreamed strange images of a dark place where she was supose to go up a creepy staircase ...it was a variation of her disturbing Elizabeth Merrell dream but this one was even darker somehow and more frightening...
She awoke to Steven's voice
Steven: Sis? are you awake?
Rosemary opened her eyes from her perpetual drug nightmare snooze to see Stevens face his eyes were red he looked as if he had been crying..
Rosemary: Steven?
Steven: Don't try to talk I just wanted to tell you I'm so sorry I wasn't there to protect you I failed I'm an asshole Dad asked me to take care of you and be the man of the family and I left you alone to face that bastard...his voice cracked with emotion and he wept openly.
Rosemary: Steven I don't remember anything I think I have amnesia or something..
The next day she awoke to someone holding her hand gently..
She opened her eyes and looked to see it was Carmen..
Carmen: Don worry Missy they gonna catch that cabron he is gonna rot in jail fo wat he done to ju...
Rosemary: Carmen! You're here?!
Carmen: I gave my cell number to Steven so he could call me if emegrenci I flew back as soon as I herd don verry Mamma Carmen don leaf ju no more Ok? I moved into Steven's rrroom and he sleepy on the coowch.
Rosemary cried softly seeing Carmen again allowed her to somewhat rest calmer now that her family was with her she would pull herself back together somehow if she could ever figure out what the hell happened to her to start with..
Later that afternoon....Ali came to see her he looked so upset he had been taking care of everything at work and had an alarm system installed in her home equal to the one at work.
Ali: Rosemary....I don't know what to say to you I care about you a lot to see someone has hurt this way makes my blood boil....
Rosemary: Ali I just want to forget this whole experience for one I don't remember anything the only proof I have is that the hospital is saying I was attacked no one was there I was alone when I fainted.
Ali: You know the Police thought I did this to you....
Rosemary: What?
Ali: Yes they kept me in the Police station for 6 hours if Melvin hadn't pulled the security cameras videos and told them we were both working together all day I probably still be in jail.
Rosemary: I'm so sorry Ali.....I will tell the police when I talk to them you are not involved.
Ali: I want you to take all the time you need to recover I am handling everything at work OK? I hope they can catch whoever did this soon so I can kill him for you.
Later that evening two detectives came to see her....they were young and goodlooking "Great two males couldnt' they have at least brought a female?
Miss Woodhouse...My name is detective Alvarez I'm from Pleasantville Police department and this is detective Manning from Veronaville Police department.
Rosemary: Veronaville?
Detective Manning: Yes Miss Woodhouse I would also like to ask you a few question if you feel up to it.
Rosemary: Detective I don't remember anything I fainted and woke up partially on my way to the hospital.
Detective Alvarez: Yes your doctor has informed us that you have post-trama memory loss but perhaps there are a few details you may recall that might help us.
Rosemary: I wanted to tell you first of all Ali my employee did not do this.
Detective Alvarez: Yes we know his story checks out and ......well so does his dna test.
Miss Woodhouse can you recall anyone suspicious around the warehouse or your home prior to your attack? Anyone who shouldn't have been there?
Rosemary: No
Detective Alvarez: If you do have any recollections will you please let us know any at all?
Detective Manning: Miss Woodhouse....I need to ask you regarding your relationship with Douglas Peterson he was recently killed in a suspicious fire in Veronaville I am investigating his death and well your name came up in the course of my investigation.
Rosemary: Douglas's death was not an accident?
Detective Manning: No we think not. Douglas did some very classified work for the military through the University and his murder may be related to that.
Rosemary: Douglas never talked to me about any of that...our relationship ended his choice he wanted to remain with his wife. I was broken-hearted and moved here to try to start over.
Detective Manning: Miss Woodhouse any information you can recall what so ever please contact either detective Alvarez or myself right away.
Rosemary: Yes of course.
Nurse Patty: Miss Woodhouse it looks like will be discharged today!
Rosemary: Thank God! No offense but I can't stand it here anymore!
Nurse Patty: It's not the food is it? (Nurse Patty laughed she was quite pretty when she smiled.)
I need to go over a few things with you before you go.....Dr. Roberts wants you to see this Doctor for follow up. His name is Dr. Luis Mendoza he is a Psychiatrist that specializes in post-trauma and memory loss. We have set up an appointment for you. It is all written down for you.
Nurse Patty: Another thing we tested for sexually transmitted illnesses and they were all negative but you should have a repeat test in a week with your private doctor. Here is a list of what he should test for.
Rosemary cringed the whole rape thing had not hit home until now for some reason maybe because she didn't remember it. She was just gratefull to be going home. Carmen, Steven and even Maggy was all the therapy she needed right now.
hotrod50s:
ahhhh much better lol great update
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