The Box Ending up Now!
starlucid:
INSTALLMENT SEVEN
At Pleasantville Jail...
Guard: Louie Thomas your attorney is here!
Louie: I have an attorney?
Guard: Apparently Louie....come with me.
Elizabeth Merrell: Mr. Thomas....My name is Teresa Cain I'm with the law firm Russell, Caine and Tate. I'm here to represent you on these rape charges. Please have a seat.
Louie: Are you a Public Defender? I haven't hired any attorney.
Elizabeth Merrell: I was retained by an anonymous friend of yours that did not wish to identified he has paid my retainer if you are uncomfortable with that then I understand I will inform your friend and give back the retainer.
Louie: I'm not uncomfortable with a freebie it's just that I don't have any friends so I have no idea who is footing this bill.
Elizabeth Merrell: Apparently......the person who retained me feels differently Mr. Thomas.
Elizabeth Merrell: So what's it going to be Mr. Thomas? Do you want an experienced Criminal Attorney or would you like a Public Defender with 50 cases for the same pay as a 100?
Louie: OK....Yeah I want you as my Attorney!
Elizabeth Merrell: Good choice Mr. Thomas.....I'm going to set up a bail hearing for tommorow Mr. Thomas
Louie: I don't got no money or friends to put up bail!
Elizabeth Merrell: No worries Mr. Thomas I find a way to get you out of that cell by tomorow.
Louie: Really?
Elizabeth Merrell: Mr. Thomas I always get what I want.
Detective Alvarez: Carla....I'm going to question Louie Thomas on the rape case I think it would help if I had a female with me it might loosen him up and maybe we will get lucky.
Sargent Ryland: Does he have an attorney yet?
Detective Alvarez: I don't think so let me check I'll call down to lockup.
Guard: Teresa Cain?
Elizabeth Merrell: Yes?
Guard: The detective handling this case would like to know if you will be present during questioning of Mr. Thomas?
Elizabeth Merrell: One moment guard I will be right with you.
Elizabeth moved forward and lowered her voice...
Elizabeth: Mr. Thomas did you commit this crime? It will be to your advantage to be honest with me because I will do my utmost either way but in order to defend you properly I need to know.
Louie: I did NOT do this I swear!
Elizabeth Merrell: Good then we have no need to be uncooperative go ahead and speak to the detectives I now have to get to work on your bail. Since you are innocent there is no worries of what you might say that will implicate you. Just don't sign anything OK? Or accept any deals until we speak again OK?
Elizabeth Merrell: My client waives the right to have me present during questioning he will answer the detectives questions truthfully and cooperate fully. We maintain this is a case of evidence mishandling and mistaken identity. As long as the detective does not badger my client then we have no objections.
Detective Alvarez: Louie....How do you know this woman?
Take a look at her picture Louie.
Louie: See that's the thing I never seen this broad in my life!
Detective Alvarez: How do you explain your DNA being recovered from her on rape kit Louie?
Louie: I don't know! I'm being set up or something!
That woman isn't even my type she looks like a frightened deer!
Sargent Ryland here is more my kind of woman she looks like she got more meat on her bones!
Sargent Ryland: Was that suppose to make me hot Louie?
It's no wonder you have to force ladies cause your moves suck!
Louie: I didn't force Nobody!
Detective: Settle down Louie!
Let's go over your whereabouts again for that day...
Louie: Damn it! I told you I was home!
Just then an Officer knocked and entered the room...
Officer: Detective may I see you for a moment?
Dective Alvarez: What's going on?
Officer: The FBI is here...they want to talk to you.
Detective Alvarez: Damn it!
starlucid:
I have more but I'm having company this weekend so I probably won't be able to update til Sunday. Have a great weekend everyone! And thanks for reading my little story!
hotrod50s:
can't wait till next update this story gets better every update
Elven_Song:
Another awesome update! ^^ The twists just keep comin'. I can't wait to see what comes next.. and I can't wait to see the end!
starlucid:
LOL! me too! I have written up to installment nine but got to do the pictures I think the pictures absolutely make the story come alive somehow.
At this point my favorite character is Elizabeth Merrell she is does sinester really well!
I almost made the Lt.General a male I'm so glad I didn't this woman is better at being an Evil Jackboot.
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