LOST
Punk Rocker:
Heyyyyyyyyyyyyy this is my story called LOST about young Amilela Love Tear whos a ghost. She had a tragic story to tell so i shall begin......:sleepy5: :sleepy5: :sleepy5:
Punk Rocker:
LOST
Young Amilela had died of the black death and her grave was at St Sebs Church. Amileas spirt whatched her family sobbing full of gref. Her mother,Janesa with her foral dress,her father,Albert in his smart new suit,her husband Tomas,grefing with his new wife,Mina. She was crying,indeed,but she had a nasty smurk on her face. Tomas was know a welthy widower and she now had all of Amilea's money and welth. TRATOR! thought Amilea as a blood tear dripped down her cheek.
Punk Rocker:
*waiting for someone too say how good her story is*:sleepy5:
Punk Rocker:
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LOST
Young Amilela had died of the black death and her grave was at St Sebs Church. Amileas spirt whatched her family sobbing full of gref. Her mother,Janesa with her foral dress,her father,Albert in his smart new suit,her husband Tomas,grefing with his new wife,Mina. She was crying,indeed,but she had a nasty smurk on her face. Tomas was know a welthy widower and she now had all of Amilea's money and welth. TRATOR! thought Amilea as a blood tear dripped down her cheek.
How could this be happing? Why did she die?Why?
A the dawn rose,Amilea faded away.... NEXT TIME ON LOST THE DEATH PART 2
Amilea finds that know matter how hard you can hate someone,she shall always forgive them.
Mandie:
Nice beginning. Pictures would be lovely, as would longer chapters. For easier reading, I would suggest using a program that helps with your spelling. For example, Word Perfect or some program like that. I use those myself, so I don't misspell quite as much. I like the concept, though. I am looking forward to reading more.
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