Cayo Hueso.. Chapter 8,9 and Final Chapter up!

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starlucid:
This is my new story I hope you enjoy...I have had the pictures for awhile and decided to go ahead and put them up.  Hope you like it.  If you like occult type stories you will probably enjoy this....but it's a little different it will have a sort of inside view to a pretty secretive cult I will try to remain accurate to those elements as much as I can.

The title Cayo Hueso means Key Bones..



Cayo Hueso

Chapter One



This is a story about a quiet unassuming man in a quiet unassuming town

Pleasantville.
Here at Pleasantville Library is Melvin Stoker it is his last night at

the library it is a place he has haunted for Almost 15 years of his

life.



Here Melvin would feed his hunger for adventure, romance and mostly his

greatest and only passion his specialty African Caribbean religion.  He

had written two textbooks on the subject and taught as a professor at

the University on the subject that consumed him.
Tonight was his last night here because his ship had finally come

in...his last textbook had been bought by three colleges and now he had

enough to make the trip of a lifetime....Cayo Hueso....a smile came to

his face as he thought about it..



He decided to send Rafa a quick email.  Rafa was his contact in Cayo

Hueso it was his online friendship with Rafa that made this trip a

reality he owed him so much.  Rafa was a religious leader in Cayo Hueso

 and ran a temple dedicated to initiates of the religion....it was a

perfect opportunity when he invited Melvin to visit the temple and

witness some ceremonies....Melvin was ecstatic!  To actually be there

not just studying it out of old textbooks and lectures...

Email to Rafa:
Dear Friend:
I can't wait to have that beer with you on the island everything is set

 my house has been sold and I have received my retirement from the

College.  I look forward to seeing when you get back from the mainland.
Sarah and I should be settled into Salty's houseboat for about two days

before you get back can't wait to meet in person finally!
Your Friend,
Melvin Stoker


Debby:  Melvin get over here!  We have a little surprise for you!

Debby and Clara were Melvin's best friends in Pleasantville they had

known him since he was a kid and fed his love of reading for almost his

whole life.  He had worked part-time at the library since he was a kid

and now it was his last night there.


Debby:  Let's toast Melvin!  To living out your dream!
Clara:  and......to passion and chasing it to the ends of the earth!


All three:  To Passion!


Melvin:  I will miss all you two you have been such good friends to me

and inspired me to always learn more I could never thank you both

enough for that.
Clara:  Melvin just go and live out your dream and your passions we

have watched you live a very sedate quiet life we want you to find of

course whatever you want but mostly adventure something to make you

feel alive!
Melvin thought about that......Clara was right...his life had been

quiet and unassuming...he had never been in love.  He had never

traveled except to lecture for the University.  He had never even had a

fling.  He was hoping this trip would ignite something new in his soul

that would make him feel more alive...

The next day....




Sara:  Melvin I'm really nervous about doing this.....my early

retirement from teaching is not going to be enough money to live on

what if we can't stay on that Island?
Melvin:  Sarah everything is set stop worrying...

Sarah was Melvin's sister she led an equally quiet safe life as Melvin

somehow after years of working on her Melvin had convinced her to sell

the family home they shared and join him on his trip to Cayo Hueso.

 She appeared to be having another neurotic moment he would have to now

work on her for awhile.  Sarah was a frightened neurotic woman.  
She had never married and had worked as a kindergarten teacher for 15

years.
It took Melvin showing her a picture of one of her students in the

paper as a sucessfull entreprenuer to kick start her need to move on.




Sarah:  What if Father and Mother can see us in heaven and don't like

us selling their home?  What if we have to come back and have nowhere

to live Melvin?  What then?
Melvin:  Sarah calm down......if that happens we will find another

house thats all.
This time tommorow we will be in Cayo Hueso a tropical paradise and you

will feel much better I promise.

The next day on the plane..



Stewardess:  Hi!  I'm Judy I will be your stewardess can I get you

folks something from the bar?
Sarah:  Well....I have never drank before well that's not exactly true

I have had anissette but that's more an aperitive than an actual drink.

isn't it?  Oh my I am rambling Miss I am sorry I am very nervous...




Melvin:  Miss it's ok just bring her a soda any kind you have will be

fine.

Sarah:  You know Melvin...I am a grown woman I am perfectly capable of

ordering my own beverage!



Melvin:  sighs....Sarah you were rambling...and sounded crazy...after

9-11 anybody that looks unbalanced gets shot first asked questions

later.
Just try to relax this is a long flight...we still have three more

hours to go.

Sarah:  Fine!  I will sit quietly in my seat and try not to call

attention to myself or appear unbalanced!

It was a long flight.....and Sarah true to her word kept quiet if not

icy for the rest of the flight.


Judy:  Folks we will be arriving in Mainland in 15 minutes so if please

upright your seats and fasten your seat belts.  I hope you enjoy your

stay on the Island!
The view was amazing from the plane they were finally here!  Melvin

felt his heart pounding......of course they still had to take a ferry

to Cayo Hueso but they were on the mainland and would be in Cayo Hueso

in an hour and half!

Even Sarah forgot she was offended at his somewhat callous comment and

seemed excited.  When the plane landed all the pasengers clapped and

cheered and so did Melvin and Sarah they couldn't have been happier.

After a choppy ferry ride they finally arrived at Salty's houseboat by

cab.  It was just a beautiful place Melvin felt a relief in seeing it

for himself even tho Rafa had described it as a very nice place in his

email.



Salty was a strange old goat he was a retired Naval Officer on pension

he obviously loved living on the beautiful houseboat and his good

humour was contagious.

Sarah:  Mr. McQuagge your houseboat is just lovely and this food is

wonderful you are an excellent cook!
Salty:  Call me Salty Sarah please!
Sarah:  Well ok Salty then.
Salty:  Well I can't take credit for the food it was prepared by my

wife Manuela she prepared it before she went to mass.  She should be

back shortly.


Salty:  As you know Melvin the natives here are more Catholic than the

Pope during the day going to mass every day and then of course at night

they do their own thing with the Santeria..
Melvin:  Is your wife a practitioner Salty?
Salty:  Of course Melvin they all are it's pretty much everybody here.



Melvin:  Have you seen Rafa?
Salty:  No....Rafa is in the Mainland probably for two more days.  But

I have a computer upstairs and dial up connection if you want to send

an email just do it late tonight so it won't interupt the phone line.
Melvin:  Thanks Salty!



Salty:  What makes a young strapping young man such as yourself

interested in the natives mumbo jumbo Melvin?
Melvin:  Well it's sort of my area I have written two textbooks on

African religions and the syncretization of the Catholic and Yoruba

religion is fascinating to me.
I met Rafa on a forum and we became friends and when Rafa invited me I

jumped at the chance to finally experience some of the rituals myself.



Salty stood up and announced....Well here is my darling now back from

church like a good little girl!
Melvin turned to greet Mrs. McQuagge and when he saw her his jaw fell

from shock!
Salty's wife was a beautiful black twenty something year old!





She greeted Salty very profusely....a little too profusely...



Sarah:...Melvin....that girl...she could be his Grand daughter...what

are we suppose to do?  While they ravish each other...I'm uncomfortable

with this Melvin...

Melvin:  shh...Sarah we are not in Pleasantville anymore....

Sleepycat:
*dies laughing* I think Sarah needs to "get some" :lol: Melvin too!


your off to a good start with this one!

starlucid:
LOL!  yeah sarah has a little neurotic anxiety thing going....the island will be good for her.....melvin too!

Elven_Song:
xD Great start! I feel so bad not having your avatar done now that you've started a new story.. but when I was working on it last week I just about finished when the computer shut down on me.. >.> was quite frustrating. Well, I'll start working on it again sometime this week.

starlucid:
Chapter Two



Salty:  I'm sorry where are my manners?
Sarah, Melvin....This is my lovely wife Manuela...the reason I wake up every morning with a smile on my face!

Melvin:  I am very pleased to meet you Mrs. McQuagge!
Manuela:  Call me Manuela please.
Salty:  Manuela speaks a little English not a whole lot I think she understands a lot more than she lets on..

Sarah:  Well Hello!  I'm Sarah Stoker so happy to meet you.
Manuela:  Hello Sarah welcome to Cayo Hueso and our home now jour home too!
Salty:  Manuela lleva a Sarah a su cuarto y acomodala. translation...Manuela take Sarah to her room and let her get settled in.
Salty:  Sarah!  Manuela will take you to your room so you can get settled and freshen up.
Sarah:  Oh thank you yes I could use some freshening up.
Salty:  Melvin you feel like a dip in the lagoon son?
Melvin:  Wow do I ever!  let's go!

Manuela:  Sarah dis is ju room...
Sarah:  Oh it's very nice thank you Manuela you have been a lovely hostess with that dinner well it was out of this world I loved and ate it all up!

Sarah:  Manuela?.....where is the door to my bedroom there .....is no door here?
Manuela:  door?  Que es eso?
Sarah:  Oh my God!  There's no door I have to sleep in a room with no door?
Sarah began to hyperventiliate.....she felt an asthma attack coming on or was it anxiety attack either way it was going to be a big one!
Manuela:  Que pasa?
Sarah:  You don't understand I have issues with my body and the idea of sleeping with no door just makes me completely panic!  Oh God Melvin!
Manuela door?  Donde esta door oh.....word in Spanish for door wait a minute puerta!  donde?
Manuela:  Ahhh....No no hay puerta en este cuarto....no door in room sorry..


Sarah:  No door in room Sarah repeated dumbly as she started to sob...
Manuela:  No! don cry Sarah why ju cry?

Manuela:  Sarah no cry....Manuela help ju ju need friend like Manuela I help ju.....ju are sad ju need espiritual help I see ju eyes Sarah.....Now Manuela is jour sister and ju no cry or be afraid no more....
Sarah:  Thank you Manuela to be honest I have never had a close friend....I think it's because I am so anxious everyone always avoids me I can tell....
Manuela:  No more cry clean up we have dinner ju see ju be happy I gonna take ju to Hilda in morning she help ju.

Melvin:  I must say Salty....I'm in heaven....it's just so peacefull and beautifull here!
Salty:  Yep!.....it's definately a good place to be to have an evening drink...want a drink Melvin?
Melvin:  Sure!  What you drinking?
Salty:  I'm having bourbon..
Melvin:  Sounds good to me.
Melvin:  Salty.....you know I have done nothing but work and study since I was 14 years old I never took time out to enjoy myself..........I was going to ask you is there somewhere here on the island that a overworked lonely bachelor such as myself?.....


Salty:  Sure Melvin my man!  Don Q's  it's a friendly sort of place you can .....unwind.......I'll give you the address tommorow so you can go check it out!
Melvin:  Thanks Salty!
Salty:  Let's go throw some clothes on I think Manuela has dinner on the table!

Melvin:  Manuela this is just fantastic!  You are an excellent cook!
Manuela:  Gracias Melvin!
Manuela:  Viejo? I vant to take Sarah to Hilda tomorow.

Manuela spoke in Spanish a bit too rapidly for any of the others to understand....


Salty:  Sarah it seems Manuela wants to take you to a local woman here named Hilda she is what the natives call a practitioner of Mesa Blanca which means white table sort of a white witch or spirtualist with Santeria elements to it.  She feels Sarah would benefit from this woman's expertise.  That is of course if you want to go Sarah.
Sarah:  Yes I do I want to go I trust Manuela.....if it's ok with you Melvin?


Melvin:  Well....I sort of had plans to do some boring things in town tommorow so it's fine with me Sarah go enjoy yourself then.
Salty winked at Melvin...
Salty:  Good it's agreed then!
The men retired to the den to watch some tv and Sarah went out on the veranda to enjoy the beautiful night.

Manuela:  Sarah!  Come swim with me!


Sarah:  Me? swim?  no no I couldn't ...no....
Manuela:  jess come swim water is good for ju make ju happy!


Manuela jumped right into the lagoon it did look very inviting....

Manuela:  SARAH COME SWIM!
Sarah:......Oh what the hell ok I will be right back!
Sarah was actually a very good swimmer she had been an instructor for children at the YMCA..

Sarah:  HERE I COME! READY OR NOT!
The water was actually divine refreshing without being cold...Sarah felt her nerves unwinding finally....


Manuela:  SARAH!  LOOK!
Manuela was pointing to the sky..there it was...a shooting star...it was a beautifull omen...Sarah made her wish quickly...


Sarah:  I wish to no longer be afraid to live......

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