Solitarios Don't Die... Final Chapter up now!

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starlucid:
LOL!  I feel driven to do this not going to be too long a story but I want to get it out of my system to see if I can focus on my other one better.

starlucid:
Chapter three


The next morning....
Marianna:  I believe you Teresa!  There was something in the bathroom last night it scared me to death!
Teresa:  You saw the little girl?
Marianna:  No I didn't see anything I heard a voice whispering in the dark but I couldn't see anything it was man's voice.  It called my name....it was horrible I couldn't move or scream.
Teresa:  Oh Marianna I'm so scared we have to do something I hate it here I feel watched all the time...
Meanwhile Miguel worked on the vineyard and small garden it was a mess this would take forever..


He was tired and worried even level headed Marianna was seeing ghosts now he could not afford to have two hysterical women on his hands this job was going to pay his next semesters college tuition and it was a free place to live what was wrong with those two?

There was a small graveyard by the path that was in total disrepair he thought about calling someone to handle that it didn't seem right to mess with the old graves..
Just then he felt a presence behind him he imagined it Marianna to sneak up on him he would spook her...


He waited until she was almost right behind him he could feel her breath on his neck and he turned around quickly and yelled BOO!


Only....there was no one there....Ugh!  Those two were starting to get to him now!

Elven_Song:
Oooh.. caught ya Star! ^^ You might want to switch out of build/buy mode before you take a picture next time (second to last pic). lol. Don't worry, it happens to all of us.

Speaking of pictures, yours are very good now! They really imply the actions and help move the story along. Going back to what your first pics looked like these are excellent! ^^

hotrod50s:
lol i didn't even notice the next to last pic showing the grid i was busy reading story and trying to guess what would happen.my particular favorite part was when he booed the ghost lol

starlucid:
LOL! yeah shoot I usually try to watch for that...going to move this story along...

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