Beguiled updated chapter five

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Elven_Song:
That's great to hear Star. Mortgage is a pain in the butt, and thankfully I don;t have to deal with it (yet). But the day will come.. -cringes in fear-

lol. Can't wait for the next part! ^^

starlucid:
ok I have done a small update to the story I'm going to try to keep it all together on the first page.  As soon as the three contests are done I will update more and longer chapters.

summer_wine:
great job! :) well written and awesome pics!

StellaBaby:
more :D
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vita4all:
Hi Starlucid,

I took a break from my own writing and just finished your Chapter 4.  I get the impression that the scene took place in the 1940s, like the movie you mentioned.  Is this right?  It would explain why Marta didn't call 911.  It didn't exist back then.   Incredible as it sounds, "decent" women didn't get raped, and were ostracized if they did.  I'm wondering if your heroine will get pregnant from this?  The possibilities are endless.... your time to write it is another matter (lol).  

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