Murda/Urban Gangstas - 10/23/2007 - Update - The Road Splits In The Courtroom
Tenshii~Akari:
I could say one word about the ending to Ch. 67, but I'll keep it to myself. (since I'm not one to use profanity on a regular basis. ;) :lol: )
Wonder how Ronnie's going to get himself out of this trap. He really hit the land mine this time... :sad3:
Veckah:
I THINK I know what is going on, but then again maybe it is just my HOPING what is going on is what I want it to be. If I'm wrong, I guess I'll find out in the next chapter. I just want to say this, sometimes a very harsh intervention is needed to save someone from themselves. Like Ronnie himself said, "Ain't no way outta this business once you get in this deep, except through jail or death."
Vita, amazing, simply amazing. With every update the characters become more and more real.
vita4all:
LMAO! I'm lovin' your speculation, Tenshii and Veckah!
And yeah, I'm keeping it real as I know how.8)
That's why it's so raw and tragic. It mirrors life as I've seen it.
Veckah:
I just now read your sig. Vita... and yea, I feel it every time I read a new chapter, or go back and read older ones.
Ali Xavier:
Got my boy in handcuffs! You keepin' it real alright.
Loved your chapter. One section was kind of a repeat, and the conversation with the dad pushed it a bit, but Ronnie was high and homies do say wild things when they get that way.
The rest TKO'd me. Your photos in general and of poverty and lost hope were so real and sad, like when I moved to Baltimore. You did a good job on Raheem in that pimp scene too. Cheena's lucky they didn't pull a train on her. Some would.
My favorite part was this one. I've read it over and over and over.
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I hadn't slipped back into my old ways, but I'd lost hope.
I was a shooting a dice game in an alley when a familiar, deep voice
behind me said, "Your daddy died in this spot."
I turned around and looked at Raheem.
"I know," I said.
I rolled the dice again and won $10.
I'd eat today.
"Come with me," Raheem said.
"You ain't gotta do this."
I followed him out of that alley and never looked back.
As a former member of the Bloods, this is one of the ways it goes down. Glad I'm out, and Mom, I thank you for that. I hope Ronnie gets out too, but we both know a lot of us don't make it.
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