Murda/Urban Gangstas - 10/23/2007 - Update - The Road Splits In The Courtroom
icekoolkat:
I started reading your story yesterday and finished it just now. That was including reading it most of the afternoon at work. What an awesome story. You know how it is with a good book that you can't put down, well this story was like that for me. I couldn't wait to get to the next chapter until I reached the latest updated chapter. You are such an excellent writer, you got deep in some parts and I understood it really well. It brought me back to my college black history class in some parts. I have to applaud you on such an insightful story that hits home for many people including me. Truly riveting, I can't wait till the next chapter comes, and keep up the great work.
Veckah:
Wow, just, wow. Happy Mother's Day
vita4all:
Thanks everyone for your comments. I wasn't sure how people would like the Mother's Day chapter at first. I just knew I had to write it. I could feel it in my bones.
Moon - Chan's lesson's from his mother come through clearly. We don't know what problems life will throw at us, or what we'll do, or have to do, to get ourselves and loved ones safely through the land mines.
Cinamun - Sorry your page takes sooo long to load. I put it all on Post 1 so it'll flow better visually. I personally hate searching through many pages on a thread to find chapters. I'm so glad you're taking the time for the story to load.
Icekoolkat - Glad you found the story and that it touches you. I work to balance the adventure and crime drama elements with depth and insight into how and why people do what they do, and reasons are often complex and historical.
Veckah - Heh-heh. Thanks for the Happy Mother's Day wish and your visible support and pleasure of the story.
Ali - Hugs. I'm glad too.
Next chapter will be up in 1 to 3 days - the photos always take longer than the writing as I put a lot of thought into them, and getting the characters to cooperate in group shots is a challenge.
How'd you all like that shark photo? Wasn't it awesome? I laugh everytime I look at it!
Take care everyone, and thanks to all.
LissaS:
Your production shows that your are really working hard on this. And yea I loved ALL the photos and the shark one is brilliant. OH YEA Ricardo is Swexy with his smooth self....MMMM tasty.
vita4all:
Whew! Finally got the new chapter ready!
But first, a public thanks to all again who left comments, and the latest are from:
Moon - I agree! My Florida mobster Ricardo did turn out rather handsome... at least until we saw his dark side. Heh-heh. And thanks for the complement on the photo art work!
Diesel - Thanks for sharing your thoughts on those last five chapters. You're a NYC girl, and as a DC girl, I loved that you feel the story exposes "hood politics", and liked my point how life in the hood is so weird, that weird is normal and normal is weird, and a lot of folks don't know anything else - or any better, especially the young ones.
New Chapter Update:
Ch. 69 - Buck Wild And Livin' La Vida Loca
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Would've loved to have had it out two days sooner, but writing this one was like walking on a tightrope, and I had to get it right. Enjoy!
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