Murda/Urban Gangstas - 10/23/2007 - Update - The Road Splits In The Courtroom
Ali Xavier:
Ooooh, the betrayals, the setups, and the falls! Everybody's playing everybody to survive. This is funny, real and deep, cuz sometimes your enemy is your friend, and your friend is your enemy. Just don't let Ronnie go soft.
Elven_Song:
That was great! I'm so glad Ronnie's finally getting some help, because he's been falling pretty hard recently. Once he get's back on his feet he'll be able to help Kareem (at least, if not others) get back on track too. Can't wait to see how it works out.
~Eve
vita4all:
Thank you Tenshii, Veckah, Moon, Applekissis, Icekoolcat, Ali, and Elven for leaving your kind and wonderful comments on the latest chapter. Thanks to others who PM'd me or those who simply enjoyed the updates, Friends/Enemies.
Someone asked me what the graph meant in the Chapter 71 - My Friend Is My Enemy. It's called, as far as I know, The Nine Dot Problem.
Solving it requires thinking 'outside the box'. Also, as in real life, there is more than one way to solve the problem, which is what Ronnie in the story is trying to do with his problems now that he's no longer blind to them. The solution to the 9 dot puzzle is in that chapter. Khalil (Kareem's brother) is only one possible solution. Heh-heh!
Get ready to find out in the upcoming chapters how the characters solve the puzzles in their life. One should be ready by tomorrow night. I have half the photos ready and all of it written; it'll shock you. Heh-heh again!!!
Also, I touched up most of the photos throughout the story, as I didn't know how to use Adobe Photoshop really well until the past two months. Amazing what adding light and contrast will do to a photo. Until tomorrow, enjoy!
Ali Xavier:
I see you're running on CP Time with that new chapter, but it's all good. :wink:
By the way, my girl and I like the way you touched up your photos.
vita4all:
Hi Readers!
^ Ali's right. This is what happened. I thought the writing for this chapter was complete 10 days ago, but had an inspiration to expand it. This required additional thought to get it just right, as well as time to take more photos.
The personality and world view of Junior is unique and even provocative in many ways, and common in others. He has the spotlight in this chapter as he comes of age and steps into manhood in an unexpected way.
I'd love to hear what you think about it, good or bad, so please leave a comment. And warm thanks again to those who have taken a moment to leave one - they inspire and energize me.
New mega update!
Ch. 72 - Junior: Always And Forever
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Take care and hugs,
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