Murda/Urban Gangstas - 10/23/2007 - Update - The Road Splits In The Courtroom
Elven_Song:
It's so good to finally get some inside detail and be able to know what Ronnie's been up to all this time we've been hangin with the rest of the crew. I'm still anxious to finally catch up with Kareem, who's still running wild, as far as we know. Good little filler there, Vita! Can't wait to see the rest.
vita4all:
Thank you Tenshi, Veckah, and ElvenSong, those who PM'd me and readers in general for your comments, nurturing and support! It's one of the things that keeps me writing.
A few hints. I introduced the cool young cousin, Kye, in this last chapter (part 5/Ch 73) to give Ronnie a link to his past - and possibly his mother. I ain't telling no more! They have a lot in common too, don't they? Heh-heh-heh.
All of you were happy over Ronnie's words: "Show him mercy."
He then said with those three words, I freed myself. I could've written, I freed him, but Ronnie is trying to free himself from violence and guilt. Ronnie, as you know, is searching for answers in his struggle to grow up and mature. The book on Buddist meditation Chan gave him helped him. Some of you remember, and some don't, but back in Chapter 33, Chan was having a phone call with Raven, who stated that Ronnie was too straight to make a committment to him, and that he was a straight-up gangsta who thought like a Buddist "even though he probably didn't know what that was." It's above this photo here if you want to refresh your memories:
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New Intense Update!
Chapter 73 - Freedom Ain't Free - Part 6: Che, and Part 7, Raheem
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Tenshii~Akari:
So Che plans on leaving everything behind and free himself and his sister from being tools again... I hope he remembers that if his dad really wants him to do "his will", he has his ways of catching up to him. Heck, if he found out where Raven was through "paper trails," Raheem would do the same thing to him, too.
I blinked. "Murda and sex has really changed you," I said.
"Changed me? No," he said decisively.
"Murda, money, sex and power freed me."
The above really got to me. His statement is so true, and I've seen it firsthand throughout reading this whole novelette! Raheem was right about one thing from the beginning: Junior did have it in him from the very start... he just had to give him a little taste of those elements. (beginning of Ch 61) That boy's a force to be reckoned with! :evil5:
Hmmm... Junior's definitely got a plan up his sleeve for sure. One's gotta wonder if he's forming his own "army" to prepare for the usurping of his father. He's seeing Ronnie, Che, Jamal, Kareem, and maybe even Tony's thirst for freedom, too. ("Freedom" being a variety of definitions... from murder, drugs, hurtful memories, or plaguing thoughts, you name it!) Knowing Junior, he'll use all of that to his advantage. ;)
Looking forward to seeing how this develops!
Veckah:
What does it say that even Satan himself is becoming truly wary of his own offspring?
icekoolkat:
OMG! Everytime I read another chapter I'm more involved in the story. I find myself rooting for the underdog. I put myself in the story, it's like I'm on the sidelines watching everything unfold. Another excellent chapter. The love story between Rita and Junior was so cute. I think he will make a good husband because he saved himself for her and only her. Again another great chapter, keep it coming.
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