Murda/Urban Gangstas - 10/23/2007 - Update - The Road Splits In The Courtroom
starlucid:
Just amazing Vita! I could easily see this as a movie.
Yorvi:
This was a good story..I enjoyed reading it..And the pics are so creative,lol
starlucid:
oh my this was a sad sad update. It's almost like a freight train to disaster. Especially that chapter on his girlfriend first getting pregnant, abortion then prostitution ugh.....it really sucks because he actually appears to love her in his own way...incredible writing as usual. Looking forward to the next chapter
vita4all:
Thanks Dinki, Applekissis, Beosboxboy, Ali and Starlucid, and others (you know who you are). So far I PM everyone personally (or email when they prefer) who leaves a comment, because feedback is a gift that makes me want to continue giving.
Starlucid - Hugs and appreciation for your encouragement! On your last comment, yes, the endless miscommunication between people leads to disasters... on a personal and social level. This is the heart of the story, Ronnie and Cheena could be the poster couple for how men and women think about relationships differently (the war of the sexes), especially when they're young, but so could Raheem and his Junior over religious differences and values (social vs. antisocial). Conflict is an opportunity to grow. But it ain't easy and it ain't over. Heh-heh-heh.
Applekissis - Glad you enjoyed the photos as well... Many came from game play, but I had to put a lot of time in others setting up scenes to match the story. It actually takes more time to do this than to create/write the story.
I thank Beosboxboy (again) for recoloring Marvine's Slim Body Builder (SBB) suits for me into amazing Gangsta Suits, and the tip on how to use Adobe Photoshop better which helped me to recolor one (see below). This also helped me learn how to do special effects in photos with Adobe. He plans to do more so keep an eye out for his amazing outfits.
Dinki - Thanks again from my heart, from one writer to another.
Ali - (my son) Thanks for helping me keep it real and keeping them hard... although you'd consider Ronnie is a bit soft in his reaction to Cheena's playin' him and losing her and their baby. Word up brotha, he's human. (smile)
For my readers who don't know, the anti-hero gangsta who you love to hate, Raheem, is wearing a first recoloration by me where I use Adobe and the polygonal lasso tool, available here, along with links to Beosboxboy's suits:
White Gangsta SBB Suit with Black Shirt and White Tie
umacee7:
I can't wait to read more . Your very good writer
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