Aouthers note- well this story is shaping up better then i expected. Though i would realy like more comments. I love hearing from people who read my stories what they think.
-The Demon and The Palace-A shadowy figure advanced on the children in the crystall palace. the opulent bulding was shaped like a flower of crystal. a woman with long hair dreaded and back in a pony tail hugged the young ones close to her as the figure advanced towards them. two teens both blond stood gaurd infront of the woman and children. Kinshi stood at the edge of the sceen her messy blond hair out of its normal ponytail.
"LEAVE THEM ALONE!" she yelled. one of the teens looked at her then hissed
"Wake up"
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Kinshi's eyes flew open she then slowly sat up. today was the day of her school trip. she ran a hand through her hair and got up. she got dressed in her School uniform. she went downstairs her mother was waiting to see her off. both walked to the buss.

When she got on the bus she was faced with nosiy kids some of witch seemed to like to make her life hell. the girl sighed and sat there in silence for most of the ride as the got to the school the kids who whernt going got off those who where stayed. She sat there looking up at the front of the buss her long blond bangs fell into her eyes.
"When are we going to get there" one of the girls upfront complained. the teacher was sitting in the front seat.
"Where almost there..." she said lightly she was a pretty woman with long blond hair and kind eyes. she smiled at them. Kinshi sighed as she sat there the landscaped passed them. she was stuck to wondering if it looked like it had in her dreams a crystailine flower. they pulled up to a rather ambiguous bulding and parked an hour later. everyone got out and milled about waiting for instructions.

As they waited Kinshi turned to the teacher her blue eyes looking up at her.
"Is this the place?" she asked slightly dissipointed by the apperance of the place.
"Yes" she said smiling brightly and putting a hand on her sholder. she looked at the place and smiled she had known about the place since she was a kid she had always hoped that if she went there they would tell her she was like the children. though,when she got older and went there she had no such luck. "Now....lets see if we can get anyone out the director is named Donna" she said wrinkling her nose. she then turned and saw most of the front of the building was made out of glass she motioned to one of them inside. then called out.

after a littel discussion with a blood haired female teen who looked quite scary to most of the kids. another woman was brought out. Kinshi's eyes widened as she saw the woman save for her odd hair she looked like a carbon copy of her sakura. as the woman stood there most of the kids turned to her. the other girl dissapered back into the buliding.
"Now your here on a field trip here...i must tell you we dont get many so we have an area set up for a bit of a speach by me and shin out reasercher." she said some of the kids complained but Kinshi just continued to stare at her

As the woman continued to talk to about waht the did there about the facility itself. Kinshi walked over to her teacher she looked at her and smiled.
"She looks like someone I know" she said lightly the teacher looked over at her with a soft smile.
"Realy i always though she had quite an unusal look...dont tell her but she kinda looks like a cat" the teacher joked kinshi looked at her then smiled.
"I'd say more like a fox" she gigled. as the spoke one of the girls asked a question about what a crystal child was.

"You will find out at the speach..." Donna said with a smirk. as she did the teacher turned to her and smiled.
"Well then lets get them inside." she said smiling. she then turned to the class "Ok line up!" she said brgihtly they did as she asked and so did Kinshi she got in the back of the line. soon they where all in and being showed around the facility
"The children are given every thing they need...we are here to increase there abblitlys and help them develop there intelegance in the process" she said as they walked outside there was a pool and several easles. soon they went up to the rooms. some of the littel girls where up there playing with toys. one a littel black girl stood up and smiled at them she then walked to donna.
"See i told you she would be with them the girl in indigo" she said brightly as she walked up to Kinshi. The littel girl backed away slightly as the girl got to close.
"Oh..." she said looking at kinshi as well.
"Anyways on to the spech follow me!" she smiled and lead them out they all sat down as did the children.
"So now where all here" Donna said lightly when the last kid sat down.

"now you have been asking what crystal children are..." Donna said lightly Shin stood up slightly when she said that.
" A crystal child is a child who has an over sensitivity to psychic power and they themselve posses these." he said loudly so everyone could hear him he the launched into a speach as he did donna watched him slightly still wondering why Kara had labled the young blond girl the Indigo girl. true the school uniform for girls was a dark blue but still. she looked at her was there something more about this child that sat before her.

She got no vibes from the girl but then she dident get much from the crystal children in her care she could be one. as she watched her the girl seemed slightly curious about what they where saying but other then that Donna couldent read her.she had a soft frown on her face. yet she still looked very calm despite. her long hair was slighly untameable. an hour later they finished the speach after each of the childre told how they had got there and Donna told them of there youngest child there she was only a toddle. as the group broke up to go to the bus she talked with shin then they both ambushed the techer and Kinshi.
"I wanted to talk to you about Kinshi" Donna said slowly to the other woman.

"What is it?" the teacher asked looking over at Kinshi.
"Oh its nothing bad...its just i think she might be like our children here..." she said
"Realy! her" she looked at kinshi then smiled brightly "I dident think they where like her from what I've resrched most Crystal Children there system busters...they dont like rules nor do the follow them" she said.Kinshi frowned it was true that it dident applie to her.
"I..I'v seen you before...Sakura" she said looking at Donna. the womans eyes widened and she walked over to her.
"Only one person calls me Sakura..."she said lightly Shin also stared at the young child.
"That would be me..." he said looking at Kinshi. the young girl looked at her.
"You look like Sakura...shes a Fox Demon...she watches me " she said lightly the teacher watched them.
"Fox demons are a sign of both good and bad..she could possbliy be seeing one." he frowned lightly.
"Anyways i would like to see her again sometime...please here take our number Kinshi and make an appointment sometime so we can find out for sure" Donna said handing her a card she slipped it into her pocket then nodded.