Fairy Months Of The Year Updated 9/13
vickylougrl:
shining Sadie's tips are good and will boost your story loads. I'm working on a story I want to post also. So I am reading everyones stories not only to entertain myself but to see what makes them good or what makes them flat. Stories that make you love or hate a character connect with readers.
For example you could once you get your set done as in appropriate background you should show them meeting with the god/ruler who is demanding they give up their babies.
You might also show the actual babies and their different destinies or at least a glimpse of it to hook your readers. Just suggestions to make the readers more interested.
Hidden~Secret:
to everyone who helped with tips I say-Thank you!I will have the next chapter up soon a long one if I might add.
Sam the T-man:
You're very welcome :)
Something else that just occurred to me - deserts are pretty devoid of forests, wouldn't it make more sense to use a temperate terrain (and use a replacement on MTS2)?
Hidden~Secret:
hum...I really wasn't thinking about that when I made them but when I created them I didn't have the intention of making them part of the story
vickylougrl:
shining since you going to move Jade and her hubby I found a bunch of cool links for you if you decide you want to load up your download folder to it's max like I been doing lately! LOL! Here ya go.
http://www.sims2wiki.info/wiki.php?title=Content_List:Fantasy
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