The Feeders chpt6 part 2
vickylougrl:
Hello I am new to this forum and I have been wanting to do this little story for awhile. It's a horror story. I hope you enjoy. Please to give any constructive critisms. Especially regarding photo taking since I feel this is sort of my weakness. I will try to update asap. Please comment and fuel me to write more!
:angel:
Hello my name is Ilina Curtis. I want to tell you my story it is a strange story, an incredible one, but it is all true. I have held on to my story for a long time. But I feel now after all these years I can tell it, if only to maybe prevent any one else from suffering my own fate. I need to tell you about my experience with the unknown and predatory beings I call the Feeders...
It began about two years ago.
I was young in love and married for about five years. I had just finished nursing school and Tim my beautiful darling was a Police Officer.
We had been renting a small apartment and scrimping and saving every dime for a new home and now we finally had enough for a down payment on a nice little starter home.
Mellisa our realtor had called one evening with the news of a nice house in our price range. It was small but the bones of the house and neighborhood were good. It was in a good school district something very important to me since I intended on having children.
I had decided to try to start a family right away and begin my nursing career after the baby had turned a year old. Tim was excited about getting started on a family he wanted to get pregnant soon too! How in love we were how wide eyed and innocent. I never dreamed that innocence would be shattered with a darkness that would consume us.
Tim took that morning off and we met Mellisa in front of the house. Mellisa greeted us with a big grin and started right away on her pitch "You know this one will not last long" It's in Pleasantville school district and it's in great condition for an older home" she was right about that I thought if the inside looked as good as the outside we might have finally found our home!
"This house meets all your wants on your list there is one little thing I am obligated by law to tell you." Mellisa seemed to have an embarassed uncomfortable look on her face. "The laws in this state require I inform you that there has been criminal activiy that has occured in this home." Mellisa stated quickly almost in one breath.
"It was a long time ago about 10 years ago a family lived here the Husband well he lost his mind and murdered his family and then killed himself" It was a very sad story and long ago the present owner lives out of state and bought the home as a rental property and well now wants to sell it.
My heart sank suddenly my light happy thoughts of our new home felt all wrong. I remembered the story the man had shot his whole family point blank in the head while they slept, I shuddered while that awfull thought filled my head.
Mellisa is the house rented now? I asked. "No dear it's vacant" "Oh that's odd I thought I saw someone peeking through the window must have been my eyes I guess" I was pretty sure I had seen someone at the window how strange.
We went into the house it was perfect small but comfortable I pushed thoughts of murder out of my mind the house was clean tidy and well lit. The owner had remodeled the kitchen and replaced the apliances it was indeed perfect.
Tim was quiet the whole time he told Melissa to give us some time to talk it over and we would let her know in the morning if we wanted to make an offer.
"You guys talk it over Tim but remember this one won't last long so we need to get an offer in soon" she preached as we got in our cars to leave.
Tim took me out to dinner that evening so we could talk about the house. I so desperately wanted to talk him into the house. I was tired of waiting to start our family. My biological clock was screaming and here was the perfect place to have our baby. Ok so it was the scene of a horrific murder but that was a long time ago and we could fill this home with our love and happiness I just knew it.
"Tim this house is perfect I think we should make an offer" I pushed as we sat down at our favorite restaurant.
Tim was quiet he had not wanted to discuss it until we had some time to think about and could do so in our favorite place where we had met.
Tim looked at me with that familiar look of concern. I hated that look. It was the look he gave me when I had been sick. Yes I guess I neglected to mention I had a bout of depression or what some people call the crazies. It was very bad I had spent some time in the hospital. Of course Tim would never forget that. See I had lost a baby. The doctor's called it post-partum psychosis. I really don't remember much except that I was very angry, sad and insane.
"Baby I don't think we should live in a place with such bad history call me supersticious but I feel houses hold memories of evil. I have seen that as a cop Ilina houses where misery never ends" I knew what he was thinking with my history living in that house might make me sick again.
I told him he was being silly. The house was great and exactly what we were looking for. I told him our lease was up in the apartment and everything else Mellisa had shown us didn't compare to this house. In the end Tim agreed as long as it didn't bother me about the history of the house and I was sure we could go ahead and make an offer on the house. I breathed a sigh of relief. I had gotten my way. Nothing was going to stop me from having our perfect life in our perfect home with our perfect baby. Looking back on it now I would have done anything to get that house I was already under it's spell.
KatrinaandTiff:
More,more,MORE!!!!:)
Hidden~Secret:
so good!!please continue or the kitty gets it
vickylougrl:
Thanks guys! I definately will continue I have a lot creepy ideas for this story. LOL!
Astral Faery:
Oooh. I'm definitely loving this one, already. I love the grainy-cartoony effect of the pictures. The third shot, of Ilina by herself, is especially pretty. I like your writing style, also. The way she keeps thinking back to 'before', and how she has a past with some mental problems, captures my interest. I'm looking forward to reading more.
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