Between the Light and the Darknes ~~~Chapter 34 - The End~~~
Stelio Kontos:
Astral Faery, this chapter wins the day because you used the word strumpet.
Strumpet= nominee for Best Word Ever.
Astral Faery:
Wow! Four comments! You guys are so awesome and make this all worth it. Thanks bunches!
mattitje - yeah, she comes from a bad past, alright. And I'm really enjoying making Jondak a jerk! Much fun. The bad ones are always so fun to play.
steelguy - men will be men, eh? Tim may go with the flow quite a bit, but he has his limits. And I certainly can say Jondak deserved it!
Lola - Nothing like a good ol' lunch room brawl, huh?
SecretAgentZero - LOL! My friends and I were quite fond of the term 'brazen strumpet'. That and wench, tart, and harpy - great words!
I'm thrilled you all are enjoying the story.
xgreydovex:
aww Tim! you fell for his trap! *pouty face* Im not saying Jondak didn't deserve it though...he deserves much more than that actually. But Shirra...jeez she gives me the willies.
:rofl:
YHsims2003:
ugh, Shirra..... i despise her even more! Ileeya should of stabbed Shirra multiple times, then cut off her head, then …..*aaghhhh!!* why is she the biggest meanie?!! hmph.
And Jondak is just her little pet, he needs to get a life as well.
Wonderful update, it riled up some strong emotions in me…if you haven’t noticed yet >_
Astral Faery:
Aw, thanks you guys. You have no idea how good your timing is today. I'm having a crappy, black mood morning, and your comments have helped pull me out of it. :)
xgreydovex - hee hee - yeah, Tim stepped right into it, didn't he? He's usually a smart guy, but sometimes emotion overrules common sense. I'm glad Shirra gives you the willies - she's supposed to. She is rotten to the core.
YHSims - oh no! I hope you still enjoyed reading it. It's funny, though, Jondak thought he had it going on, that he was an evil little thing, then Shirra came along and made him her puppet. But...without a big meanie, there really wouldn't be much of a story, so somebody had to do it.
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