Between the Light and the Darknes ~~~Chapter 34 - The End~~~
Sam the T-man:
Oooh, wow! Wonder how he's gonna get out of this one... Great stuff! And don't let me hear you complain about Photoshop ever again ;)
mattitje:
Ow Ileeya poor thing! How would she react when Tim act like shes air to him her heart would break! Damn imagen to have a sister like that o.0...
Stelio Kontos:
Hot..... :D
Everything was......hot :P
Hot indeed.
Astral Faery:
Sadie - thank you! Yeah, Tim keeps managing to get himself into trouble. And I've been practicing my photoshopping. I've done just about everything in the last several chapters - except the fire reflecting off Malir's eyes. My hubby did that for me. But I only know a few trusty tricks, I have to learn a little at a time or my brain just turns to mush - more than usual, I mean.
mattitje - Shirra definitely has an axe to grind, doesn't she? Thanks for reading!
SecretAgentZero - LOL - do you think it was too much? I'm still kind of biting my nails that someone will flag it as inappropriate. I tried to keep it tasteful, but still express everything I was trying to get across.
Stelio Kontos:
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SecretAgentZero - LOL - do you think it was too much? I'm still kind of biting my nails that someone will flag it as inappropriate. I tried to keep it tasteful, but still express everything I was trying to get across.
No, no, not THAT inappropriate. With the story I'm working on, I might one-up you with the "descrptive, yet not inapproporiate" description of sex and other miscellaneous things.
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