Between the Light and the Darknes ~~~Chapter 34 - The End~~~

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Sam the T-man:
I think that makes two of on that front :angel: (That'll be much, much later though). It's definitely a challenge, trying to write a sex scene and keep it PG-13 - in fact, I might end up with two versions of this latest story, the way my mind's been working lately ;)

In fact, that's not a bad tactic to employ for any of us; write out everything you want to describe in an adult version, then figure out how you're gonna water that down in the "main" version. Haven't tried it myself just yet, but about to start...

Astral Faery:
SAZ - Okay, I'm breathing a tiny sigh of relief right now, lol.  Let me know when you have a part 1 of your story up.

Sadie - I was planning on doing that, making a PG-13 here and otherwise on my own blog (as you probably remember from that notice I posted awhile back), but when I really got to looking at the story, I realized I could take out more than I thought without hurting it.  I'm glad, though, because doing two different versions would be a lot of work, lol.  This chapter nearly killed me!  I'm not used to doing such long pieces.

steelguy:
Okay, that was DEFINITELY worth clinging to a cliff face for!

Evil twin! Evil twin!

I just hope Tim gets to kick Jondaks' butt at some point. He's asking for it, poncy blonde pointy eared (fade off into muttering)

Sam the T-man:
He will - these guys always get theirs in the end ;)

@Astral: Gawd, yeah, don't talk to me about long chapters... >_< I got a longer one than this coming up too... I do remember what you said about putting up an adult version - in fact, when I saw "spicy chapter" in the title, I went to your site first ;) I don't think it was inappropriate either, just FYI ;)

Stelio Kontos:
Quote from: Astral Faery;1178974

SAZ - Okay, I'm breathing a tiny sigh of relief right now, lol.  Let me know when you have a part 1 of your story up.



If everything goes according to plan, I can get it up by May or so.
Knowing my luck, however, nothing will go according to plan.

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