Between the Light and the Darknes ~~~Chapter 34 - The End~~~
ZAYURY:
CH 21: Oh, Ari… This was sooo sad… :( I miss Gertie too!!! That last pic of Tim crying was pretty heartbreaking! :( :(
CH 22: Ooooo! The excitement is mounting! I’m glad Ileeya is starting to improve with her powers! I can just imagine Tim’s frustration at having to stand back and say nothing to Jondak. Great story my friend! :wub: :rah:
CH 23: Poor, poor, poor Ileeya! :( I can imagine the agonizing pain of seeing the man you love making love to another woman, poor Ileeya, what torture that must have been… :( I feel horrible for Tim also, to have to force yourself to be with someone you despise! I’m glad he was able to play it off, can’t wait until Shirra realizes that, lol! :evil grin: >)
CH 24: OMG! OMG! WOW! Ari, this was STUPENDOUS! My dear friend, I know only too well, the difficulty in getting all those incredible shots, the various poses, the sets, MARVELOUS my friend absolutely stunning work with those pictures! :rah: :rah: :wub:
I was shocked too when Tim slapped Shirra, (must admit it felt good lol) man that girl is total psycho! AWESOME chapter, awesome story my friend! :wub: :rah:
Astral Faery:
Vicky - LOL! I'm dying to put Ileeya in something different. Soon...
Oh, Zayury - your words have me floating on air! What wonderful things to say - thank you ever so much for all your fabulous compliments.
Yes, chapter 24 was an absolute bear to shoot, lol. I was nearly pulling my hair out in frustration over setting up each and every shot. It was actually physically painful, lol! Thank you for noticing and I'm so happy you're reading. You're getting caught up really quickly!
ImpishParody:
Awesome new chapter Astral! Yay for blood, lust and bloodlust! :D
Things are really starting not to look too good for Ileeya and Tim! (not that they were in the first place with Shirra wandering around xDD)
I'm curious about the guy in Shirra's dream, want to see more of him, please and thankyou ;)
Can't wait to see what you throw at these characters next!
ZAYURY:
CH 25: Lol! Poor Tim, fainting like that because he might be a ‘hero’ lol! :D The flashback picture was beautiful my friend, I loved the ones of Shirra thinking on her bed, love that bedspread by the way! :) I’m so glad they got to tell the King what is going on, but I’m worried about Shirra’s suspicions… :{
CH 26: OH MAN!!! OH MAN!!! Poor Tim!! He was doing so well, he almost convinced her, DARN IT!! I had a feeling that ‘Ileeya’ was an illusion, but hell Tim did not listen to my warnings!! Lol! Girl, this was a FREAKING AWESOME chapter, WONDERFUL pics, and special effects, my friend!! YOU ROCK!!! :wub: :rah:
CH 27: OMG! Girl, how do you do it?! You’re a FREAKING GENIUS! First, the pics are GORGEOUS! I love the sharpness and crispness of the ones from the history of her family! :wub: How do you come up with all those beautiful characters and their names?! Your imagination knows no bounds my friend!
Merillon, dang HOT, HOT, HOT!!! Lainel, girl she was such a beautiful girl, loved the pic of her surrounded by the flowers, and she grew up to be such a beauty! Girl, the pics of the hangings were amazing, awesome CC!!! :wub:
Jondak’s grin was priceless, lol, great pic of him! He is quite the looker! I fear though he is going to get quite a surprise if he goes ahead with his plan, lol! ;) Gerta looked so lovely in those pics, I hope Tim and Ileeya kick Shirra’s arse!!!! AWESOME STORY my friend! :wub: :rah:
CH 28: OMG! OMG!! WOW! What a chapter!!! Girl, this was AWESOME! Talk about action all over the place! Your pictures, the special effects, the fighting sequences, all were freaking AMAZING! The very first pic of Shirra laying on her bed in that pose looks gorgeous! :wub: :rah: Shirra’s outfit is wonderful, (saw the link you posted thank-you) and was she ever pissed… Lol! Man that is going to be a freaking awesome fight between the sisters!! I can’t wait for the next chapter my friend. THIS STORY AND YOU BOTH ROCK!!!! :rah: :wub: :rah:
Astral Faery:
Thank you, Impish! Your comments are always enjoyed! Yes, things are definitely heating up now! And don't worry, you'll find out more about the mysterious man in the next chapter or two.
Zayury - WOW!! My gosh, woman, you have made my whole week with such wonderful comments! Merillon is a treat, isn't he? He turned out really yummy, lol. Acutally, if you take Lainel (available for download in post #647) and change her into a male - you'll have a pretty close Merillon. You'll need to take off the makeup first, though. Or not, depending on your preference, lol. Thanks again, Zayury for catching up and leaving such fabulous comments!
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