Between the Light and the Darknes ~~~Chapter 34 - The End~~~
beckey:
Well done! Bravo! Perfect I absolutely love it! The latest chapters are not yet submitted on the site but thats okay because its here! If you wanted another story to be done you could try doing the story of the child. Maybe Shirra is found and revived or something and comes back to take revenge on their child. Who knows, but If you did it, it would certainly come out great! ;D Wait. Now your annoyed because I gave you another idea and you will have this big heap to do until you finish it... Sorry :D! Can't wait for the new storys to come! I thought I had writers block before too. :D I dunno, maybe I'm best at following on with stories.
-beka
discowhipped:
Ashhjadlafju. Wooow.
That was the most excellent ending. Everything is wrapped up and explained but not all perfectly (I mean not all lollipops and rainbows), which is a good thing. Well executed pictures, and the photoshopping was awesome for the portal, really believable. There a few little unexpected twists! So Gertie did die, but Tim didn't kill her? I wasn't expecting Ileeya to lie about Shirra's evil spawn either.
Ileeya's outfits are so pretty. Love her first dress.
Man. I've been reading since September '07? Woah. I still sort of remember how I came across this story... I had read your contest entry for some contest (the biggest bitch or something?) with that grey elf girl in it - still love that story by the way, I still remember it well. I was completely hooked so I followed the link in your sig (I think) to this story and started reading. And here I am over a year later. Weird how time goes by so fast. But it's been a good one.
And as was said before, congratulations on finishing!! You must feel so pleased, after a few struggles and things, to have finally completed it.
Anyway. Sorry for making cheesey speeches. Feeling nostalgic.
I'm so happy about the ending but so sad at the same time.. No more Tim and Ileeya. :(
But yay for babies! ;D Would love if you shared pics of the child..!
Astral Faery:
Beckey - thanks! I'm really happy you enjoyed it. Those are some pretty good ideas, and I'll let them fester in the back of my head and see if I want to do anything with them. But at the moment I want to leave Tim and Ileeya in peace. Too many other story ideas are calling.
Disco - I love your cheesy speech! ;D How cool to see how you ended up reading. I'm very glad you shared that little story with me. I'm thrilled you liked Sheldyn's story, as well, and ONE DAY :rolleyes: I will go back to her. I really do want to tell (and write some more) on her story. But life is crazy and busy and I only have so much patience for setting up and snapping pics. I want to spend some time with Victoria (from Every Family Has Its Secrets) because she's been waiting since before I even started BLD, and then I have lots more ideas after that. Oy. It's a great thing, but kind of suffocating, too, because there's just not enough time in a day.
I would love to share a pic of the baby. So far he's an infant, and looks like just about any other infant. He ended up with Tim's skintone and eyes, too, I think. But I do have to warn you, Tim and Ileeya don't tend to breed well, lol. I'll try to get a toddler pic by the end of the week.
LouieLove:
Aww.
It makes me sad he'll never go back to his mom and dog though :_(
lol, BRAVO
steelguy:
*Hauls self up from the brink of the cliff. Stands, pauses, breathes deeply. Sighs.*
'Scuse me, stupid mountain breeze, got something in my eye. *sniffle*
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