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« Reply #15 on: October 02, 2007, 09:03:04 am »

Thank you, Fercho.  I am honored that you think so.

Okay, on with Part 3.


He was running.  He had been, for a long time.  He was exhausted, but he dared not stop.


A quick glance behind him revealed that his pursuers were still following. A group humanoid shapes with toothy grinning faces were chasing him across an unknown landscape. They had a predatory look in their eyes, and blood smeared across their lips.


An angel with silvery hair came down from the sky and told him to hurry in her sweet voice.


She landed before him and stretched her arms out to him...


...then gasped for breath suddenly. Her hands fluttered up to her neck and she tried to speak, but it was useless.


She fell to her knees, suffocating.


Tim watched helplessly as the angel collapsed in a heap in front of him.


He rushed to her side to help her, but it was too late. He looked at his fallen angel and felt an overwhelming sense of despair.


"NOOOOO!"


He looked behind him in a dazed stupor. The creatures were almost upon him now, grunting excitedly.


He looked back down at the angel, but a demon stood in her place. She hissed at him, baring fangs.


Tim recoiled. It laughed and reached for him.


Its hand brushed his face and he screeched in agony at its touch.


The demon cackled, rising into the air. Apalled, Tim turned to run.


The demon grabbed him by the neck. Tim heard his own screams echo back at him. Icy hands choked him, stifling his screams and his breath. He grabbed at the hands, but he couldn't pry them off his neck.

"No," he croaked.

The hands squeezed tighter, and he staggered, falling to the ground.


The demons surrounded him, chortling excitedly...
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« Reply #16 on: October 04, 2007, 12:59:50 am »

Poor Tim all he did was try to walk his dog and ended up in this hell hole!  I'm loving this so far astral great demons too!
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Now, when you come under their power, one of them who is the overseer will say to you: "Who are you, and where are you from?"

You are then to say to him, "I am a child of humanity and I am from the Source."
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« Reply #17 on: October 09, 2007, 06:55:50 pm »

Sorry it's taken me so long to say thank you, Vicky.  Those contests are keeping me busy!
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« Reply #18 on: October 09, 2007, 08:14:37 pm »

lol! me too astral!  they are so addictive...but it seems I will get eliminated soon in at least one so I get back to my story and everyone elses! Plus I want to do another story...so I'm tempted to hurry my other one along.
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Now, when you come under their power, one of them who is the overseer will say to you: "Who are you, and where are you from?"

You are then to say to him, "I am a child of humanity and I am from the Source."
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« Reply #19 on: October 10, 2007, 11:52:13 am »

I sooo know what you're saying.  After working on my BB&B entry, I feel pulled toward Sheldyn and really want to start doing her story.  Add to that one I started a long time ago and still want to work on eventually, and two more ideas swimming around my head - sometimes I can't decide which one to work on.  But please finish The Feeders first - please?  I'm not addicted to it or anything, lol.
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« Reply #20 on: October 11, 2007, 10:49:27 am »

I'm really, really sorry to those of you who are reading this.  This part is very short thanks to the difficulties I'm having with Freewebs - where I have my story posted.  I need to use my site to remember which pictures go where, and to copy and paste my text (so I don't have to type everything all over again).  Things were going okay, but now the site is completely offline.  So, again I apologize, and it's going to be several days before I can finish this part.  I'll try over the weekend, but the kids will all be here and I find it close to impossible to work on my writing projects when they're here.

Chapter 4 - part 1


He awoke with a start and sat bolt upright as a strangled scream escaped him. He was sitting in a dimly lit room, soaked to the skin in perspiration. He sat momentarily dazed as he tried to make sense of his current situation.


He heard a soft voice behind him, speaking words he couldn't understand. He jumped up, whirled around, and looked into the face of a very beautiful woman. The same woman he saw before he passed out. He hadn't been hallucinating, she was real. The same woman who was an angel in his nightmare. The same woman who turned into a demon.


She spoke again. Her melodic voice formed syllables foreign to him, but much different than the language of the king and his peoples. He watched in fascination as her lips formed the intricate sound patterns that made up her speech. She repeated the same sentence again, and Tim noticed that at the end her voice rose a bit, like in his own language when one asks a question. She seemed to be asking him something.


"I'm sorry, I don't understand you," Tim said helplessly.
She smiled and played with a simple silver ring on her left hand.
"You are not elven," she observed. "What are you?"


"Oh. I'm, uh, human."
She looked confused. "Hu-man?" She struggled with the pronunciation, which proved to Tim there were no others like him here.
"I am not familiar with that race. How did you get here?"
Tim recounted his experiences up to now, leaving out the nightmare where she changed into a demon.


"You mean they didn't come to get you, you came to them?"
"What do you mean?"
"The Raikan. They are planeseekers. They travel the planes in search of slaves."
Tim couldn't speak for a moment. Slaves? Plane seekers? Elves? It was too much to digest all at once. He decided to change the subject.
"I'm Tim. Who are you?"


"My name is Ileeya."
"How is it you're able to understand me now?"
"With this ring," she held up her hand.
"I don't understand. How can a simple ring help you speak and understand a different language? Especially a language for a race you've never even heard of?"


"It's a magic ring, of course."
Disbelief lingered on Tim's face. 'Oh boy' he thought.
"You know," she continued, "a magic ring. You have heard of them, haven't you?"
"Well, only in stories..."


"Only in stories? Where did you say you were from?"
"Oh. I didn't. I don't know what plane I'm from, but my world is called Earth."
"I've never heard of it."
"I'm not surprised. And you say you're elven?"
"Yes."
"I've heard of elves only in stories, also. Are other elves like you?"
"How do you mean?"
"Well, with pointed ears."
"Of course."

The door opened then, and a few pieces of what looked like dried meat were tossed into the room on the floor and a pitcher and glasses was set just inside the door.  Ileeya turned toward the 'food'.


Tim watched as she ate a piece of the meat, still turned away from him. He watched as the dim light of the room played across her hair. He couldn't help but notice her shapely figure underneath the small white dress she wore. It was quite a short dress, and he stared dumbly at her muscular thighs which, like the rest of her flawless skin, was the color pale moonlight; white, shimmery.

'This must be heaven and hell combined.' he thought.
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« Reply #21 on: October 11, 2007, 10:55:37 am »

That wouldn't be where you got the name of your soul feeder from, would it? Wink

I love fantasy stories, but most of them (in books) are too complicated for me to get into, so this is a welcome change Smiley

Psst... where did you get her dress? Cheesy
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« Reply #22 on: October 11, 2007, 01:04:31 pm »

Hooray - a new reader!  Thank you for your compliment.  It really means a lot.

Uh...hee hee - you got me!  'Raikan' just kinda popped into my head when I saw the Creature Feature contest.  Yeah, I'm a dork.

Eek!  Ileeya's dress came from the exchange.  I downloaded it a long time ago.  If I crank up my game later today, I'll hover over it and see if there's any text with the creator's name.
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« Reply #23 on: October 11, 2007, 02:22:55 pm »

Okay - Freewebs appears to be cooperating at the moment, so I'll try to get the rest of this part up.

Chapter 4 - Part 2


She turned and he quickly looked away, blushing fiercely. Either she hadn't noticed he had been staring stupidly at her or she pretended she hadn't noticed, so as not to embarass him further.


She poured a glass of water and handed it to him before pouring one for herself. Tim drank greedily, emptying the cup in seconds. He hadn't realized how thirsty he was.


His thirst momentarily quenched, he stole another glance at Ileeya. Luminous bluish eyes stared back at him. He could get lost forever in those eyes. He couldn't bring himself to look away. She returned his gaze for several seconds, and then, blushing, turned away. She was shy, that was kind of exciting.


As a distraction she picked up a couple of pieces of the dried meat and offered him one. Electric fire tingled in his hand where it had brushed hers. His eyes never left her face, but she did not look back at him. Ileeya collected a few more pieces, crossed the small cell, and sat down to eat them.

The water was refreshing, but the food did little to satisfy his voracious appetite. But, he thought, something is better than nothing. He had another glass of water to quiet his stomach.


Tim felt a sudden pressure in his bladder, obviously from all the water he had drunk.

"So, what do we do when we have to, uh, use the toilet?"

"The what?"

"Where do we go to, ahem, that is..." he crossed his legs uncomfortably and she got his meaning.

"Just knock on the door and tell the guard. Believe it or not, the people here are very particular about the cleanliness of their cells. They won't allow anyone to go in the corner. Knock on the door and say, 'Keeyak'."


He did so. There was a pause before the door creaked open and the guard grabbed his arm. The guard closed the door, locked it, and double checked it.


At the end of the hall they arrived at their destination. The guard opened the door for him, and Tim stepped into a dimly lit room. A wooden bench with a large hole in it sat immediately before him, and to his right was a wash basin and a towel.

'An outhouse', he mused. God, he hated outhouses. That seat didn't look too comfortable.


He went about his business and hissed a word of irritation, when of all things, he got a splinter in his butt. He could always ask Ileeya to remove it for him. He smiled at the thought and went about taking care of it.

An impatient growl accompanied by a loud rap on the door startled him. He swore under his breath and tried to hurry. He found the agonizing pain in the ass, removed it, and pulled his pants back up. He was just starting to wash his hands when another fierce pounding rattled the door.

"All right!" he yelled angrily.


The guard scowled at him and grasped his arm, muttering to himself. By now, Tim had reached his boiling point. He was tired of being pushed around by these goons. Tim attempted to twist away, but the guard's grip tightened on his arm, causing him to grunt at the pressure. He realized later that he should have given in and let it end then and there. But being stubborn, he didn't, and the aching muscles and fresh bruises he received wouldn't allow him to forget it.


With his free arm he elbowed back with all his strength. His blow landed in his captor's stomach, causing him to exhale forcefully. Tim took that free moment to easily twist out of the creature's grip. The guard reflexively covered his stomach where he was hit and winced as he struggled to draw a breath. Tim then punched him in the face, causing him to reel back into the bathroom. The guard stumbled backwards and landed on the 'toilet'. Tim grabbed the guard by his shirt and jerked him around so they were both facing the back wall. The guard struggled, but he didn't have enough time to react. Tim kicked him behind the knees, causing the guard's legs to buckle. The guard went down on his knees with a frustrated yell of anger. Tim proceeded to shove the creature's head into the toilet, then realized it wouldn't be as effective as on his own world since there was no water in it. He cursed himself as he felt incredibly stupid.


Tim was suddenly grabbed from behind and pulled out of the lavatory. His arms were pinned behind him.

The guard by now had stood and brushed himself off. He sauntered over to Tim with a sneer on his face.

'Oh crap' thought Tim, as the guard's fist flew at his face. The blow landed on Tim's left cheek and nose, bloodying them.


The guard laughed heartily. They stood there glaring at each other, the guard and Tim, for a few moments before the guard started punching randomly. After several punches, Tim was released to defend himself.


Tim got another good hit to the guard's stomach and several to his face.


Then the guard connected a solid hit on top of Tim's already bruising left cheekbone. The blow knocked Tim to the ground. He was kicked several times in the shins, stomach and arms that were defending his face before the guard felt he had gotten his revenge. There was some muttered conversation and chuckling between the two creatures up above him. Tim was pulled to his feet and forced to walk back to his cell. He ended up half walking, half being dragged all the way back.


The door was opened and he was thrown in on the floor. He was dimly aware of Ileeya gasping and and yelling foreign, angry words at the guards. One of them gave her a sharp retort and slammed the door shut.


Ileeya bent over him and rolled him over. He was beginning to see a pattern here; entering the cell on his face and being rolled over by the soft touch of an angel. He tried to say her name, but was sharply reprimanded.


Ileeya ripped off a piece of his shirt, moistened it from the water pitcher, and used it to clean Tim's bloody face.
"Hey," he protested weakly, "this is an expensive shirt."
"Ssshhh."
Her touch was delicate as she dabbed at his wounds, and her face was compassionate. As weak as he was, he had to restrain himself from grabbing her and plunging his hands deep into her silken hair. It was almost unbearable holding back; just being near her made his heart race.


She stopped cleaning and cocked her head to one side, listening. Then she got up and stood near the door. She looked at Tim and put a finger against her lips, shushing him once again. It was then that Tim heard muffled voices outside the door. He couldn't understand them, but Ileeya was listening carefully. The voices rose in anger, then stopped completely.


"Aark is in trouble."
"Who?"
"The guard who assaulted you. Apparently you were not to be harmed. Aark was on strict command to keep you safe. Now he has to report to Kayrn, the captain of the guards."
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« Reply #24 on: October 11, 2007, 07:22:32 pm »

hmm.. he has found love in hell wow!  That elven is very pretty.
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« Reply #25 on: October 11, 2007, 11:39:06 pm »

hummmm, Gertie is gonna love Ileeya!!! I do now LOL

this story is really cool, you get involved with the characters easily wich is so hard to achieve, congratulations. Poor Tim what an awful day, I bet it was a Monday LOL.
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« Reply #26 on: October 12, 2007, 12:53:02 pm »

Aw, thanks, guys!  I'm so thrilled that you like it.  I was worried people would hate it, after I spent so much time on it.  Your compliments inspire me to work on it more instead of throwing in the towel and saying, "Forget it!"  Thanks.

It took me awhile to come up with an Ileeya that I liked.  There were lots of rejects, lol.

LOL, Fercho - definitely a Monday.

Sadie - The only thing it says when I hover over her dress is 'Summer Holiday'.  I can't seem to find anything.  I'm sorry.
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« Reply #27 on: October 12, 2007, 12:57:47 pm »

Ah, that's okay. It's just one of those things I clap eyes on thinking "Yeah, I could do with something like that" Wink I'll have a sniff around next time I can be bothered Wink

Ironic really, the one place he likes someone and it's not where he lives. Sounds familiar ¬_¬ Nice work Smiley
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« Reply #28 on: October 13, 2007, 01:42:07 pm »

Isn't that just the way love usually goes?  Thanks for the compliment!
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« Reply #29 on: October 13, 2007, 09:50:32 pm »

Wow, love your story. I'm a huge fan of fantasy. You can now count me as a regular reader! Smiley I read your whole contest entry for BB&B lol... I randomly browse entries when I'm bored. And now you have me hooked. XD
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