My Story
KatrinaandTiff:
Sorry guys,
I have no photos be cause I am moving and my other computer was packed,the one the Sims 2 on it.So I am out of,luck till the move is complete.I will try to get the pictures ASAP.FYI:I was opening one of my cupboards,and it whacked me in the face.
Once,on a nice Sim day,Ann Glandes,was gardening,she looked up in the sky,she knew it was going to rain.She saw her kids upstairs playing with their dolls.Jane and Kelly Glandes were in the bedroom playing with their brand new doll house.Ann was getting her rain coat to get ready to go to the store.She checked on her kids and hired a nanny."Hi,This is Ann Glandes,Um...,I need a nanny for my kids."Ann paused to listen."Mrs.Glandes,how old are you kids and what do they like to do?"Ann thought for a moment."One of the 2 girls I have is 4,her birthday is tomorrow,so she will be 5.Then the other,Jane,is 7.But both of them like to play with their toys.Why do you ask?"The phone was silent."We need to find the perfect nanny for your kids,right?"Ann thought,Well she is right."Okay,"The phone was silent again."Would you like the nanny to track your schedule or would you like her to just come for right now?"Ann thought about it."Just for Now.Will my kids be alright?"The phone had some background noises like a phone ringing for probably somebody else wanting a nanny."They will be alright Mrs.Glandes."Then the phone was hung up from the other line.Ann got her coat and went to the car."Bye Jane!Bye my sweet Kelly!"And Ann was off.Ann went to Wal-mart.She went to the grocery aisle and asked for assistance.He was cute.Her cell phone rang."Hold on."The assistance was standing there and decided to go help somebody out while he waited."Hello?"Ann was frightened by the number on the phone.The number said,911.Was that the correct number or was my phone messing with me again.But no, it was not."Hello,the is the emergency station,are you Ann Glandes?"Ann was afraid to answer the unknown voice.She knew it was the emergency station.But why would they call?
Ann was shocked what the emergency station has to say.
Sorry,That is all I have.I got to get working on it though.They are real characters that I have finished their generation in the game.So that family now has great-great grandchildren. :-P
vickylougrl:
katrina looking forward to reading your story once you settled and get your pc back sounds interesting.
KatrinaandTiff:
:welcome:By the way;I finally got a name for the story!:welcome:
Ann's Chase
Chapter 1: Part 2
"Ann,your husband......"Ann was listening closely."Yes........"Ann was worried."Is my kids alright?"Ann was trying hard to hear what the man had to say about her husband."Miss,your husband had died today in a sidewalk shooting."Ann dropped the phone and her jaw dropped.Ann burst into tears.And the associate came over and looked confused."Miss?"Ann tried to hold back her tears."Oh I am sorry.I had a phone call and well....."Ann started remembering all the moments she had with her husband."Do you need anything?"Ann forgot what she was going to ask him."Never mind."And with that,Ann walked off to buy her food.
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Later that night,Ann was cooking her lobster...well rather chopping what she need for it,and heard a scream and what heard like something sliding.She ran to the family room to find her daughter playing with the game."SSX3?"Her daughter eyed her."Jane honey, is everything okay?"And Jane turned back to the game."I am trying to win this mommy!"And then Ann went to go upstairs to check up on Kelly.Kelly got up and walked to her mother."Mommy!!"Kelly would go as fast as her little legs could every time Ann entered the room when Jane was not playing with her."What are you doing Kel?"Kelly started to stare at the new dollhouse."Oh!Do you like that toy?"Kelly nodded.She could not quite talk yet but she was starting."Are you hungry!?"Kelly nodded.So Ann picked her up and went off to the kitchen and placed Kelly in her highchair."Mom!!!When is dinner ready!!!"Ann looked at the stove."It's done!"And Jane ran to her chair and sat down."Yummy!"Kelly was eating her oatmeal."When will daddy be back?"Ann looked scared.Should she tell her 7 year-old daughter the accident that she had heard on the phone earlier?"Um....I do not know honey."And Jane shrugged and continued eating.Everything was silent for a while.
Thanks vickylougrl!
I love your story too!But, no offense, but Ilina is a little "chubby" in some areas.I could tell some tips.See, what I do when I continue this story,I look back,minimize it, get to my game,remember what I can,or I can print my character's picture,tape it to desk somewhere where it is clean and nothing is in my way.See when I had to go to bed when I was in create a character,since I like to fall asleep during stuff,I printed it.I think,but I remembered things.Again,no offense.But I love it!!i love the baby!He is so adorable.
Thanks people!
And lollipop_girl,try to do a sequel to Serene,I loved it.
And here is an extra
My list of stories.
1.Serenes Undead Story
2.(kind of a tie)The Feeders
3.Banished
4.Ann's Chase
Thanks all you readers!!
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vickylougrl:
LOL! Ilina is a little curvy! I hate boney sims. Some female sims look better unfit. Remember she had a baby...lol!
I think your story sounds interesting it's just a little hard to follow the way it's written.
Maybe you could tell us more about Ann for example:
Ann was a typical housewife in Pleasantville. Her life revolved around her family and it's activities. She kept herself busy keeping house and kids 24-7. Although her routine was hectic she was quite happy. Until one day a phone call changed her life forever.
Then you could go into the phone call part?
Just a suggestion of how to make your story easier to follow.
KatrinaandTiff:
Well,my game is back!Just need to know how to post the pics..
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