Midnight: A Vampire's Tale
vita4all:
Hell hath no fury as a woman cheated out of seeing her last sunset and mortal life, followed by watching the premature death and burial of her orphaned baby... only to face ambivalence, years later, about embracing a mortality and a shot at love, and to letting it pass her by. I love ambivalence in characters. Makes them so interesting.
At least now Caitlin has a shot in having a friend and vampire partner of the night... her late lover's daughter Sydney Elisabeth.
Hmmmm. I wonder what she'll decide?
Synaptic, I enjoyed your fine writing ability. Your photos and the expressions you captured were wonderful. Very nice!
SynapticSim:
WOW! Such a detailed critique. Thanx Vita4all, I really appreciate the feedback, it means a lot.
~ Syn
vickylougrl:
I'm finally caught up I'm enjoying this very much the only thing that would make it better would be for it to be in a movie!
Mystie2:
Wicked awesome sweetie keep up great work love the story Waahhhh!!
Stelio Kontos:
Good looking vampire-killing vampires originally from 1800's Southern United States wins the story section on originality.
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