My Story-Death of a Brotha on the DL

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vita4all:
Jazzi, your description of the subtleties of body language between two strangers who are sexually attracted to one another was on target, interesting and entertaining. Wonderful photos, too. I look forward to your next chapter.

Astral Faery:
I agree about your pictures - they are colorful and captivating.  It's clear you put a lot of thought into what you shoot.  I really like the unity of the family, and the fact that our main character has this whole other world he's keeping secret.  I like the teasers for the next chapter, too. :)

jazzi04:
WOW!! Thanks so much Vita & Astral for the wonderful comments on my story, and Yes Astra I take many screenshots until I feel I've capture the shot. I love taking screenshots of my Sims that's really all I did besides creating a few Sims. Until a few memeber's from other  forums  would suggest I should try writing a story, I thought about it and decided to write this story. It was really hard for me being my first and all I'm glad I did.
jazzi :)

-Little-CJ-:
Wow, your sims are hot! There clothes are cool too! I love the story

jazzi04:
Thanks so much Little - CJ for the noce comment, glad you enjoy the story!!
:)

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