Gender Defenders: Behind The Scenes - Chapter Twelve: Change of Heart

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erica_jean698:
Very nice update!  I'm so happy that Kii and Zamir were understanding.  Of course I knew they would be. ;)

Oh just imagine sitting down for tea and being told that vampires, werewolves, plant people and aliens really exist.  I think I would have indigestion at the very least! :smt120

Please keep them coming!  :D  I'm still secretly hoping Kat makes an appearance, but if you want to keep it guy orientated I understand.

And as far as this:

Quote from: Sadie79

How do you mean? Which bit? There was a jump from one to another but I did that deliberately - wrong site to go into too much detail


I wasn't sure if they were, let's say, built the same way.  It sounds like they were a bit confused by what they found.  I wasn't sure, but I'm probably just misreading innocence. :angel:

Sam the T-man:
Oh, you don't mean this do you?
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My moaning grows in volume until he stops, and even though I can’t see him I know he’s giving me a strange look.
“What the…?” he chuckles.
I can contain myself no longer and burst into a fit of quiet cackles. On realising what I was doing, so does he.

Leo was messing about. It started with a soft little moan of pleasure, then he decided to start making louder noises for no other reason than him being Leo ;) If that's not what you meant, either you're misreading innocence or I'm mistyping it ;) As for the other part... maybe, maybe not... ;)

erica_jean698:
Ah!  It all becomes clear now.  :D  Cute and funny, and so precious.  I love writing for teenagers and you do it well.

Sam the T-man:
Thanks! :D Glad you're enjoying it :)

sjam:
Yay! Totally love it...update!!! :D

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