Murdered with Love ~ Chapter Seventeen ~ Final Update
KatrinaandTiff:
More more!I just love it.I have been go around the site looking for something good and I found what I was looking for but more than what I expected.Great job!!!!
*Katrina :)
KateTheSuperKat:
Thanks Katrina, even though I feel some parts could definitely use improvement, especially the pics. :)
Chapter Ten
Warning: Includes cursing and violence.
When Alex came close to Sarah’s house, he could hear raised voices. He stopped to listen.
“Just tell me what happened, stupid cow,” a male voice said. That was obviously Rivers.
“They murdered my son!” Sarah exclaimed.
“I want details, stupid woman.”
Alex raised his brows. Rivers didn’t seem in an all too good mood.
“They... They came... They murdered my only son!” Sarah broke into sobs. Alex heard a loud bang and cursing. Rivers must have got up so abruptly, he had hurt his knee against the table.
“Damn table!” he shouted. “Why do things always do that? Why does every single damn thing get in my way?” Alex decided he sounded pretty mad. “I ask you one more time,” Rivers went on, “what happened?”
“They killed Nick!” That was enough to cause Rivers to go all mad. Alex heard him run to the other side of the room. The next moment Sarah screamed. Alex tried to open the door. It was locked. “Shit...” He took a look at the glass in the door, and grimaced. Then he slammed his fist right through it.
“Ow!” Alex bit his lip, and opened the door. He ran into the living room. He saw Sarah on the ground, and Rivers above her, kicking her. “Hey!” he yelled, pushing Rivers aside.
“What the hell are you doing here? Get off me!” Rivers struggled but Alex was stronger, and pushed Rivers against the floor.
“What the hell do you think you’re doing?” he asked Rivers as calm as possible.
“I’m questioning a witness!”
“You were kicking her.”
“She didn’t answer me!”
“Of course she didn’t! She is in shock! She just lost her only son!”
“That’s not a reason to ignore me!”
“You are obviously out of your mind!” Alex told him. He took a closer look at Rivers. River’s eyes were red, and he obviously didn’t shave himself in days. Only then he noticed the smell of River’s breath.
“Have you been drinking again?”
“No!” Alex knew enough.
“You’re obviously drunk. You know what? I’ve had it with you. I take you to the boss straight away. I hope they fire you.”
“You’re not going to!” Rivers hit him. Alex took a deep breath. Rivers had crossed an invisible line. Behind that line he was not responsible for anything he did.
“That was quite stupid,” he said. Then he punched Rivers.
KateTheSuperKat:
Chapter Eleven
“And then he did what?”
“He hit me, sir.” Alex sat on an uncomfortable chair in Steam’s office. The boss himself sat on the only comfortable chair, behind an enormous desk.
“I had no idea Rivers was capable of something like that.” A silence followed. At last Steam said something again. “Well... I will make sure he gets fired. The police can’t use people like him.” Alex nodded and got up.
“One more question. How did Rivers get that bruise?”
“I was forced to hit him, sir.”
“Oh... OK.” Alex opened the door, when Steam interrupted him again.
“You’re in charge of the case now.”
“Sure, sir.” Then Alex managed to get out.
He closed the door and walked away fast, as if he feared Steam would call him back. Steam was probably a good boss, but he managed to annoy Alex every time again. Only when he stood outside, Alex slowed down. Where to now? He checked his watch. It was already five pm. Home, he decided. He had worked without a single break for three days now, and to be honest, he was surprised he was still able to walk. He got his bike and left.
*****
Seven days later
Alex woke up from a loud noise outside. He lifted his head off the table and looked around. It was dark. A quick look at the clock told him it was three am. He sighed. It had been a week now, and he hadn’t discovered much about the case he didn’t know yet. He stared down at the papers.
The mother of the victim went outside, and screamed for help. A neighbor noticed her and called the police. Several neighbors have been questioned, but none of them had any useful information. These conversations are below.
Miss Johnson, 60 years old:
"Have you heard or seen anything last night?"
-"No, sorry. I'm a bit deaf."
"OK. Do you know if the victim had any enemies?"
-"I don't think so. He wasn't very popular among us, but no one would kill-
Alex stopped reading and went through the many papers, till he found what he needed.
The first victim didn’t have many friends. Before he became a successful lawyer he was addicted to drugs. A certain Miss Johnson, 60, found him on the street in front of her house, and took him to the hospital. There-
Alex felt his heart beat fast. There it was, the link between the cases he had been looking for. It had been right under his nose all the time. But still, why would Miss Johnson kill these people? And was she really that strong? It is easy to stab someone from behind. And everyone can handle a gun. He quickly got up. It was his duty to arrest Miss Johnson straight away.
KatrinaandTiff:
No,I love the pics.You can do better with me.I do not have any of that windows maker or photoshop or any of that.Most of my pic sims are from downloads.I got all the expansions,3 stuff packs,Baby Luv, and The Movies all packed up on a monitor I have had for maybe 7 years with a computer hard drive and tower for as long as I can not remember.But still,I say your story is perfect and there is absolutely nothing wrong with anything.I post stories that nobody replies to.If I was somebody who rates stories.I would say 5 stars.*****:)Hope to hear more.
Medagic:
He's got it all wrong! Although...This may happen to lead to another certain person...
Getting good!
Medagic
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