a P e r f e c t S t r a n g e r - new chapter up
lilroselou:
After being on hiatus for a while a piece of life is back, i've renamed it 'a perfect stranger' and the pictures and custom content (the characters included) have all been updated. i have most of the rest of the story done but its a matter of doing the pictures and putting it together now. PLEASE LEAVE COMMENTS AND FEEDBACK and i hope you enjoy it! the part where it has been updated will be on page 3 and will look noticeably different.
weak, wearing and lifeless - 3 words that could sum up marcia and carl's marriage.
And cold, dull and limp not three things that say 'great sex life' their world was falling apart at the seams and marcia had to do something to stop it...of course, no-one expected her to go as extreme as she did, and as she stared up at the ceiling even she knew she had gone too far she felt weak wearing and lifeless...........
"get up carl it's time for breakfast......."
*sighs* "CARL! wakeywakey cmon!"
she knew he was awake, he was trying to get her to come upstairs - she didn't answer.
she sighed and tutted as she waited in the kitchen cooking croissants
They had to be perfect like every thing else in her life, like her:
car, her mowed lawns, her primed red bob, neat skirt suit, her marriage, her carl....
she sighed knowing she would end up going to see him and soon found herself on their 3rd floor opening the door to their bedroom.
"honestly carl what do you wa..."
"hey babe"
"carl what are you doing?"
"trying to be romantic and impulsive"
"erm okay..."
"try to sound less enthusiastic" he said sarchastically
"look ive got to go to work in 15 so i dont know what your expecting to happen"
the look on carls face dropped as he slumped down on their clean, neat plush double bed.
"we need to talk" carl mumbled in a dulcite monotne
"marcy?" he said as she wandered out the door..."marcy hon" hey said as he followed her into the kitchen.
"Marcia" he said calmly but with sharp intent
"what's wrong" she replied simply
"our marriage"
"carl i am not discussing this with you now" she said as she led the now argument into the front room.
""marcy our marriage is in serious trouble, you have this vision of a perfect life that we are in and it's not real!" he said with firm intent
"iv'e given you everything ive run this marriage from the start and i shall till the end!" she screeched at him
"youve never given me the one thing i told you from the start that i wanted! ive let the non exsistant sex life pass me by, ive let you wear the trousers in this relationship, ive let you continue this fantasy world in your head but youve never given US a baby" he answered slowly softening his voice
"fine then let's try for a baby that'll solve everything" she said quietly and reassuringly
"nothing will fully solve this marriage marcia" carl said as he led himself upstairs and after the sound of a shutting door and a small pause macia led herself to the car, started the engine and set off for work.[/B]
lilroselou:
i shall be posting the next update soon - i hope someone is reading it!
lilroselou:
their argument had hit home at marcia, she didnt want her marriage to fail, how could she tell her friends her family her colleagues that she was getting divorced?
no, she couldn't let it happen so over the next 4 months they relentlessly tryed and tryed for a baby. marcia slowly became obsessed with having a child and every night that she and carl were both home from work would mean it was another night of trying.
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romantic efforts were pointless and as much as they tryed their spark was barely there.
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Carl started beginning to think that he didn't love marcia anymore, but he wanted a baby and right now she was willing to give him it.
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they had been trying for months to get pregnant and nothing they had gone in for tests and were awaiting the results
"that's the mail sweetie" marcia said calmly
"i'll get it then" carl answered
about 5 minutes went past as marcia was too scared to go outside and find out what was going wrong with their attempt to have a baby, finally she plucked up the courage to get up and head for the door, and as she got near the front room window she caught a glimpse of carl reading the letter
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tears were streaming from his eyes and she ran out to him already knowing what the answer was.
"CARL!" she said running toward him
" no marcy don't you don't wanna see it!" he said as he pulled the letter into his chest.
"i know i know we can't i can tell!" she said in tears
"it-- ii--it's not that marcie"
a short pause that seemed to last longer went on as marcie stopped crying and hung her head down
"it's me isn't it"
there was another break of silence to which carl didn't reply her question but simply responded with.."sorry"
she burst into tears again but chocked them back as a single tear ran down carls face from his bloodshot eyes.
"i'm the reason we can't have a baby?" she said in increasingly high tones
again carl dodged confirming her question but just repeated "im so sorry"
marcia turned for the door and head inside, carl didn't immediatley run after her but waited a while as he knew nothing he said could console her right now.
marcia sank into her plush quilted duvet and started to sob, they couldn't have children she thought and it was all her fault.
lilroselou:
hi please do comment on this story i would like to know whether this is point to continue on in this it does take up quite a bit of time to do and im not sure if anyone is reading or enjoying it?
Hidden~Secret:
I just read this(sorry I didn't notice it before)and its amazing!
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