a P e r f e c t S t r a n g e r - new chapter up
lilroselou:
i loved doing this one because it was nice to see them as they were younger, carls sister lily is going to become a bigger part in it all grown up, if anyone has any idea how to get the pictures bigger it wud be a massive help - ive put the setting of camera size to large and made sure i uploaded the snapshots and not the thumbnails but it still comes out this size.
Lola136:
wow that was pretty good cant wait to see what happens :)
lilroselou:
sorry about there being no pictures in this one, as im sure yuor aware my computer has some problem with pictures, sims is also starting to muck up on this household (dodgy download perhaps) so i am trying to finish this story off quite quickly, ive already started a new story but picture problems are repeating itself so for the next few updates there might not be any pictures. ill try to put some back into the chapters when it reaches its climax
Marcia and Carl had been arguing all day and autumn was getting pretty sick of it. She had overheard what the couple were planning to ask her, and she didn’t approve.
Autumn had known carl for years, since he was a little boy infact, and knew this wasn’t like carl to ask another human being to give up their child to a pair of strangers.
But were they strangers? Harri had been living there for nearly a month. She was gaining a bit of weight but not yet starting to show, well not really.
Over the past month carl had become increasingly infatuated with her, she had a cute giggle, quick witty sense of humour and a fun spontaneity for life.
Marcia had been discussing asking harri for her baby for the past 3 weeks with carl. Though carl said no each time, he was getting increasingly worried that she would ask without him.
Autumn continued to make dough in the kitchen whilst Carl read the newspaper, her hands were dusted with flour which she wiped over her apron and swept her forehead leaving it white and powdery.
Carls hair was messy and his skin tanned. He had a sweet and sexy smile and was completely unaware of what was about to happen.
Marcia kept staring at him awkwardly but he hadn’t noticed, she quietly got up from her chair and placed her book on the table.
Carls eyes raised from the paper and followed Marcia’s stride, it was only when he saw her glance back at him with that expression that he knew what she was up to.
But it was too late. She had already gone into the living room and there was no way he could stop her.
It would ruin everything, he couldn’t run and interrupt her, or tell her to come back. He turned and frantically rushing his eyes after her looked up at autumn in desperation. She knew what marcia was doing as well but felt as helpless as carl.
Carl sunk his head into his hands and waited. About 2 or 3 minutes later he heard it, the noise of footsteps hurrying up stairs and the slamming of a door.
He paced into the next room and saw marcia, with a shocked expression, she turned to face carl and immediately started to cry.
“you’ve done it haven’t you.” carl said blankly.
“im sorry, I didn’t know she’d get like this.” marcia sobbed
“yes you bloody well did!” carl shouted “how dare you!”
“ive ruined everything haven’t I.” marcia stated
“yes, you have!” carl wept.
Marcia came closer to carl and tried to pretentiously fling her arms around him and sob into his beating chest, but carl pulled away and she began to howl.
Carl did not reply but shook his head and ran upstairs.
Marcia slumped into the sofa and curled up into an almost foetal position bawling her eyes out.
Carl found himself outside harri’s room, the closer he brought himself to her door the more he heard her whimpering and crying.
He knocked once, to no reply before proclaiming “it’s me.”
By voice alone she knew it was him, and the tone told her he wasn’t a threat, she opened the door and saw him facing her, he mouthed ‘sorry’ and wiped his eyes.
Harris face looked so beautiful and sweet, the tip of her nose was red and shockingly she snuggled into his chest.
The pair stood there for a short while embracing each other, carl kissed her forehead and buried himself in her long brown hair, as he towered above her by a few inches.
Harri pressed her head against his torso, feeling his heart thudding inside his body she felt warm and comforted.
She felt a feeling of security she had never felt before, “yes.” she said muffled by his clothing.
“what?” said carl as he held her arms and pulled his body away from hers and looked into her eyes.
“you can have my baby.” she said looking away from his stare.
Carls whole body went numb, “you-you don’t have to, don’t listen to marcia she’s being stu-”
“just say yes.” she interrupted, her eyes welling with tears.
“thank you, thank you so much.” carl said as he embraced her in another heartfelt hug. But something didn’t feel right. He couldn’t believe what harri was saying, his eyes raced around the room.
But he didn’t notice Marcia standing by the door…
To be continued….
lilroselou:
this story at some point will intertwine with my other story ashwell brooks, there will be a reference in the next update but it will only appear in the other story too toward the climax.
ktggoodnight:
oooooo i love the climax building!! dont worry we shall wait for pics
you need a photobuket sort of account- upload the pics there and then your pics will come up big!
i think this sotry is really relistic which i love, keep i tup!
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