Eidolon*Chapter 1

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evlevnz92:


















And so ends my sucktacular prologue. Less angsty characters*, coming soon (um, maybe**) to a forum near you! ...I mean, here.

*Is it possible for me to write about non-angsty characters? Hah, this should be a challenge!

**Followthrough, don't fail me now...! T_T

Theraven:
this sounds promising :D. I want to read more, at least. (I really like cartoon-ish sims stories :D)

Astral Faery:
It think it starts off with a pretty good bang.  Your words flow nicely and are set at an even pace, which would make reading this story enjoyable.  I love the warped stairs picture, too.  :)

Stelio Kontos:
*makes mental note to read this sometime in the future*

The Commodore:
Very nice start! I love the last two frames, with the transition from his world to the fantasy world.

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