Xenophobia: Pride & Prejudice - Chapter Twenty-four
Astral Faery:
Coolness, Sadie. I like Buzz's internal dialogue - it gives us a tiny bit of insight of his relationship with Lyla - but only a tiny bit, lol. It was neat to get inside his head a little - I learned that Buzz has many more feelings he's struggling with than I was giving him credit for. He's not as harsh as I thought, and there is hope for him, yet - with help, of course.
Great job - Nice character development, we learn a little more about them in every chapter. I look forward to learning even more about the characters in the next installment.
Hooligan:
Wow, that sucks for Tank: first Johnny pops him last week, and now his dad got the other eye! (Or is it the same one? Heinous.) I'm glad they're going to get help, they need it.
I tell you, this is really making me want to take this neighborhood in a similar direction. I haven't played ST since the reinstall, tho, and I REALLY need to focus on PV instead--I am trying to get enough to write something of my own about that one, and I really don't need anymore distractions (lol!).
These two were great. You actually had me checking back every two hours or so since I read chapter nine, waiting impatiently for the next installment. :-P
CynaraBlade:
Yes, I've actually been keeping in touch with this story, even though I don't hang around here as much as I used to. It's great, and I hope it's something you don't lose interest in any time soon!
I wonder about the identities of the other guys Ripp claims to have been with though...hmm, will you be dropping any names, by any chance?
Sam the T-man:
Thanks guys! :D
@Astral: All in good time ;) At any rate, it was good to get inside Buzz's head for a bit, and there'll be more to follow eventually. For now it's a bit of everyone.
@Hooligan: Yeah, it's not been Tank's week either - and it was the other eye ;) Glad I managed to inspire you to rescue your copy - careful with the Grunts though, they can be addictive.. (if they're anything like mine, anyway)
@Cynara: There'll be a little name-dropping, but no one you know - Ripp actually jabbered on at me for a while about that, specifically his first time ;)
At any rate, I'm gonna have to tell not just Ripp, but all of them to back off a little; Uni starts next week, and I have catch-up work that I should have been doing, but instead I've spent most of the holidays writing! I've just managed to get my sleeping back on track too - I was staying up 'till gone 10.30am and waking up at 7pm! I'm far from losing interest, but this is getting ridiculous...
Glad you're all enjoying it anyway :)
ETA: Durr... I will get some work done tomorrow... >_< Alright Tank, you've got the rest of tonight, just don't do what your brother did and keep me up all night...!
Ahem. Just called to say an adult version's been posted - if you're old enough to read, find the link on my siggie at InsimAdult - I'm not posting it here ;) Doesn't look all that different at first, it's more noticeable later on. It certainly will show in future chapters ;)
steelguy:
Ooh. Internal arguments with self. Been there.
Worst when you start doing it out loud. People look at you funny.
Um. Not that I've done that. *shifty look*
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