Xenophobia: Pride & Prejudice - Chapter Twenty-four
joe_mulcahy:
Very good chapter! I loved the closeness between the characters, the brotherly love Tank now expresses toward Ripp, and Ophelia beginning Tank's makeover. Who would have thought Tank would agree to a bumhugger, imagine that!
I enjoyed the self talk in General Buzz Grunt's head as well. Good show! Keep up the good work.
chocolatedalek:
WOW. This is amazing, I cannot wait for chapter 14. At all. Wow, wow, wow. My stories are'nt 1/2 as good, and I'm hoping to be an author!! Sadie, can I borrow/ Steal your talent?? Please?? I need it, You are amazing!!
(Also, just wondering, what's gonna happen to buck. He's in love with Jill in my game, just out of interest...)
Sam the T-man:
Aww, thanks guys, I'm so glad you've all enjoyed the update :D About the next one.. erm, yeah. Started about to revise the start of chapter fourteen, then my imagination took over, and I've not long finished chapter nineteen :angel: I will get to it in a minute, honest.. after my picture perfect entry's out of the way I'll get the pics for that one :)
Wow, all these new comments too.. :D
@steelguy: LOL @ update song :lol: But yeah, there's gonna be ghosts in future chapters. Not specifying which ones, but they pop up from time to time ;) Gonna be some freaky stuff in general, I am partial to the paranormal :D
@Ari: :laughing: Glad you enjoyed it as much as I did writing it :D Yeah, I like her too, she's fun to work with :) They all are in different ways, I love 'em.. when I'm not trying to pose the buggers, that is... ¬_¬ Tank's makeover won't be "realistically" complete until part two - whether that's a "physical" or proverbial split in parts I haven't decided yet. And yeah, Buzz gets more complicated the further we get in the story ;)
@Hooligan: Oh yeah, I remember that song you posted. Cool :) Yep, merged them myself - and borked it all to hell :P Still, I learned a few things.. I think. Yeah, the neighbourhoods might be in different states, although the greener areas could be dotted around the same one for all we know. From what I gather there's more temperate/colder areas of Arizona (the mountains), as well as possibly greener areas close by...? Would that work? :angel: Re: Mrs C - yep, either JM's vampire fixes, TJ's visitor controller or both will fix that problem. I've had the VC for ages, wouldn't be without it just for banning the Uni NPCs.. ugh >_< I sure as hell don't fancy a cranky old lady smacking my sims around just because of their obsession with PDAs.. got too many 3 bolters for that ;)
@Joe: LOL Tank didn't agree to a "bumhugger", that was the whole idea of that scene ;) But thanks. I'm having a lot of fun with Tank in shaping his character, you'll see a maybe familiar side to him a little later. And yeah, they do make quite the clique, these guys, they all gel so well I couldn't not write in the building closeness between them :love2: In fact it's quite inspiring, I think - although I say that after finishing chapter nineteen ;)
@CD: Aaw, thanks :D I'll get to chapter fourteen soon, I'm making a point of it in fact (while the text's sent off for proof-reading I'll get the PP pics done too). What's gonna happen to Buck? You'll have a long wait for that one.. *cough* sequel *cough* ;) I noticed something creepy about his appearance once he hits his teens though, but that's only through working with certain other sims so I'm keeping quiet :angel: Put it this way, it makes for extra story material ^_^
Thanks for the continued support guys *kisses* Much appreciated! :)
ayako447:
nice! the pictures were superb!! keep up the good work!! hooray! i like the story
steelguy:
I got Buck through to his teens once in my game and yeah, he doesn't age well. It was all like zap-colours-cheers etc and ... oh.
I think it's something to do with the nose?
Anyway - ghosts? Well I do know one place in Strangetown where you can find a bunch of them, but that's just me speculating. :)
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