Thompson Family Legacy:Finding an Heir

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Hidden~Secret:
Sorry for the double post but here is the next chapter:

Jenna:Something smells...oh eww its the stinky babies...maid!
Well do it yourself!You only have 300 simoleons left so get to changing the babies diapers or I'll call the social worker on you!
Jenna:Oh no you wouldn't!
Try me!
Jenna:Fine I'll do it...

Jenna:Aww little fried chicken!Your such a wonderful child.
Um Jenna you know SHE has a name.
Jenna:She does?
Yes she does
Jenna:Well food names are easier.
Says the woman who eats so little foods.

Hold it!Cut cut!She's going to kill her children!
Jenna:Uh lady I think I know how to hold my children.I won't drop them!
Wanna bet?
Jenna:Yeah I do!

Arg stalker!Just tell her to leave.Like she wants to be friends with you!She's a teenager and your a dumb adult.Do the math because you damaged her life by talking to her for one second you half wit.
Jenna:Um ignore her Amy she's not worthy!
*rolls eyes*Miss drama queen!

Told you!!!!She's already angry with you.

Your daughter hates you!She loves her mom.
Josh:Ya ya I just change its diaper,feed it and put it to bed so ya like I care.
Well you should because remember I'm god and your unworthy!Mwahahaha!!!

Mr.Fancy is going to work!
Josh:Thank you...thank you very much
Your not Elvis you know?
Josh:Nope I don't know because I am!

*dies with over laughter*
So you dress nice but go in a beat up old wagon?My mom can do better and she doesn't even work!
Josh:Its a limo in my eyes.
Yet its filled with dirt and trash.

Happy birthday to you...happy birthday to you...Mackenzie your old enough and we're proud of it.Happy birthday to you!
Jenna:Happy birthday smelly turkey!
*yawn* Jenna is that all?
Jenna:Yes it is!

*points finger*
Aha!I told you that you were a bad parent.Fork over the I'm not worthy chant.
Jenna:I'm not worthy!I'm not worthy!I'm not worthy!I'm not worthy!
And this continues on for another hour or so but its too funny to show so we advised to do it on a different level by just moving on and not doing anything by shooing all the graphics of this awesome amount.I know it sucks!

Jenna:I'm sorry but will all my children and me not being able to afford a nanny or someone else to look after my children I'll have to quit to look after the triplets but Elvis...I mean my husband will continue working.
Oh great so now we'll go from 300 to 100 in probably one day.I do want to give you a real house some day you know.
Jenna:Give me a mansion and I'll do whatever you want.
Yeah right and I'm the all powerful beautiful woman who everyone in the world loves.

I had to put this in.It was too cute not to.

You quit your job...the highly paid on and you're searching for another one?You gotta be kidding me!
Jenna:Well I'm keeping my eyes open for a perfect opportunity!
Yeah...right!

Happy birthday to you.Happy birthday to you.Happy birthday beautiful Molly.Happy birthday to you!
Jenna:Did you know I love her the most?
No you don't!You just don't want the social workers coming here and taking one of them away.
Jenna:Well yeah theres that of course!

So sorry but Maxx hasn't aged yet no matter how hard I tried.

Hidden~Secret:
I'm not continuing this story.No one comments at all anymore so why should I even try?When any of you get some respect and comment then I might continue.I thought this one would be different that you all wouldn't be so cruel as to not comment.So why should I even?I try my hardest and I did my best to make it as interesting as possible & I really wanted to continue.Is it that no one on here likes me?Is it that all hate me?Is it that its boring?Is it that you all are too lazy to comment?So whats the problem because I'm fed up in trying any more to have someone comment.I have so many views but not even a page worth of story/comments to make me want to continue some of you might not care but I do because I'll quit creating stories if thats just it.For those of you who care but didn't realize what you've done then I truely apologize because its not your problem because you didn't know.So someone please comment and tell me whats the problem because I have no clue what so ever.

Cluedo:
HiddenSecret, don't panic.

When I was posting my story (well adaptation...I didn't come up with the idea), I wasn't getting much comments at first.

Just keep plugging it in. There's nothing worse than an unfinished story. Surely you love the writing process as much as the comments you receive. I know comments are a morale-boost to continue writing, but I think people are waiting for a crucial point to happen.

Anyway, good luck if you continue or not.

PegasusDiana:
I don't really read the stories often, but I have seen some great stories on here that when I read them I couldn't stop till the end. Yet they only had a couple comments, if any. Same with some of the video's I've seen some fantastic video's I have to comment on and I'll be the only one that comments which makes no sense when they have 100's of views. You have several comments on this story. Plus you have a lot of views so more are reading it than are commenting. It's really cute. I wouldn't give up on it, and I'll be reading it now for the updates because it's a wonderful story. Can I ask how did you get triplets with no cheats? I thought most they could have was twins unless you use the triplet/quad hack. My sims have never had triplets. :(

steelguy:
I only just caught up with this again today, so here's my comment:

Yaaaaaaaaaay!!!!!!!!!! Update! *dances*

You're so snarky with your sims. :)

Feedback is very important, I know. It's not enough to know that people are reading it, you want to know what they think of it. But people are reading it. Remember that. They're not ignoring it.

Lurkers and Shy types, possibly.

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