The Great Journey Chapter 5 started
Stelio Kontos:
Not exactly the best pictures, but the story helps carry the story higher. An 8/10.
Sierra117:
Quote from: SecretAgentZero;1145201
Not exactly the best pictures, but the story helps carry the story from the pit of failure. A 7.5/10.
Notes for pic taking: At least put a tile roof on your buildings if you're gonna see the roof/ceiling in any of the pics.
So your saying im just making it worse? I have been working very hard on this, and I think its fine. I did put a roof since i hid because if it was visible, then you wouldn't be able to see the stuff inside.
Stelio Kontos:
Quote from: GamerFreak07;1145234
So your saying im just making it worse? I have been working very hard on this, and I think its fine. I did put a roof since i hid because if it was visible, then you wouldn't be able to see the stuff inside.
Sorry......................Thou art not psychic.
It's just a pet peeve of mine, seeing skylight in interior shots.
Ignore my last score. It's now an 8/10. At least keep the roof on during the interior shots.
Sierra117:
After the event of Mark and Nancy, the police chief found out something even more devastating.
"Sir, I've looked through the Andersons records and it seems that they have 2 children, One a male named Victor and another named Brittany" said the desk man.
"Hmmm, so those little ones are out hiding somewhere?" said the police chief.
"Actually their grown up" the desk man said.
"Well that scores to many victories for the day" said the chief.
"And the SWAT teams are being deployed at their last known location."
"Should I alert the officers that are on guard?" the desk man replied.
"Yes, and put Leroy in charge of them" said the chief.
"Yes sir" replied the desk man.
Chapter 3: The good and the not so good
The cop car jerked to a stop and all the cops got out to meet a squad of SWAT team members about ready to storm the building.
"So uh heh when are we going to storm it?" replied a cop member.
"Well we need to send someone at the back and secure it so that we can storm it safely". said the SWAT Squad Leader.
It was now 3:00
"Men were about ready to storm it, everyone get prepared!" shouted the squad leader.
"Gaberial! go through that path in the hedges and secure the backside!" shouted Leroy.
"Steady!" the SWAT Leader yelled.
Gaberial than ran in the hedge path and secured it.
"Backside Secured!" she said.
"Okay everyone ready?" the SWAT Leader shouted.
"YEAH!!!" everyone shouted.
But that shout is what ruined the mission. Why? because I woke up from it, red and blue flashing against the house, and I ran to the guest room and found out that dad still didn't finish the back deck.
I thought for a second, should I take the risk of going down the ladder, or surrendering? Well I choose the ladder, and it worked.
I went down the ladder still dressed in my PJs, I slid down it, and then jumped off the deck and went to the hedges in the back. But then I heard a big loud "GO!" I ran behind the hedges and then banged into someone sending me to the ground. When I saw who it was I tried to run but was pulled back.
"Shhhh!" A voice said.
"Who are you?" I said.
"I'm Gaberial" she said.
"So your a cop trying to help me?" I replied.
"Yes and I know what this is all about".
Just then the cops burst into the side of the house and secured it.
"Its time to move they'll be comin out empty handed any moment."
After every SWAT and Police member was inside, me and Gaberial escaped.
"Nothing over here sir"
"Negative"
"Nohting was found" reported the SWAT member to the captain.
But then a SWAT member found out that there was a ladder leading from one of the bedrooms.
"Sir, in the second story we found a ladder leading down to ground level" reported a member.
To be contiuned.....
Stelio Kontos:
Nice. Back up to the original 8.5/10 score.
And............SWAT team rules.
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