Witch Hunts I am finaly done
OwlM:
every day I sat at a big table wishing he was there to share my feast with him.
OwlM:
Every eve I sat in the hall waiting for him or at least some news from him. But every eve was the same for me, I did not gave up, I was a loyal wife. Dont think that he was all that, he did send me letters when he had chence, but as good wife it was my duty to wait for him.
OwlM:
At night I could not sleep, every naoise that happened outside my house, was like a signal for me to wake up and check if he have come back to me
OwlM:
And then I would sit in front of the piano and play his music untill a morning. It helped me not to forget my duty of the faithfull wife
Astral Faery:
Hi! I think your story is off to a pretty good start. You have introduced your main character, and told us of her plight by taking us through her lonely day. Now we can empathize with her, and it will help us really care for her as the story continues. You have also foreshadowed interesting things to keep a reader wanting more. If I may make a suggestion? Your pictures look good, but are difficult to make out. If you go under 'options' on your sims control panel, you can set the screenshot size to 'medium' or 'large'. Most people use large, so others can see all the detail the author painstakingly put in the photos.
Cheers! I look forward to the next part.
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