Unexpected ~ Sequel to Murdered with Love ~ Chapter Thirteen
xgreydovex:
oh. my.
as much as i think that shes a psycho killer...i still dont want her to die
:'(
keep going! (this better not be the last chapter *angry growl*)
j/k...kinda :D
KateTheSuperKat:
Nah, ten more and a spin-off I'm currently working on. XD
Chapter Six - Rescue
Alex watched the car slip, going towards the giant tree. Though the car had an enormous speed, everything seemed to happen in slowmotion. He saw Val try to open the door, he saw her glancing in her mirror. Then the car bumped into the tree. The windows exploded, and shortly after a fire started. Without thinking he ran to the car.
When he arrived he saw the fire had almost reached Val, who hung back in the seat. Lifeless, his brains told him. But he didn’t want to accept that. Somewhere in his brain there was a part that didn’t agree with what had happened, a part that didn’t believe this was the end.
He tried to open the door, but it wouldn’t. He kicked against it, and the door fell on his toe. He remembered the same thing had happened the day he met Val. This time he made no attempts to replace the door, but instead closed his hand around Val’s arm and pulled. And pulled. Only then he noticed she had fastened her seatbelt. Smart. She would have flown right through the window if she hadn’t.
After he had removed the seatbelt, he pulled again. This time the car let Val go. It made a strange noise, and he imagined the broken bones it caused. Well, something worse than broken bones was about to happen when he left her there. He lifted Val, or rather her body, from the ground. He started to run, taking Val with him. He looked over his shoulder. Just once. Most of the car was on fire now. It was just a matter of seconds before the heat would reach the engine, and made the car explode. He ran faster. Then the explosion came. Though he wasn’t close enough to get seriously injured, the force of the explosion was enough to throw him off his feet.
He fell on the ground, and so did Val. He coughed and tried to get up. However, his body wouldn’t let him, and he crawled towards Val. He grabbed her wrist. A pulse, give me a pulse. He waited. Nothing, not even the slightest heartbeat.
“Come on,” he muttered. “Just breathe.” He took a look at his watch. Seven minutes already and he had never been good at helping dying people. He remembered that time he was still in Police Academy.
“Come on, Alex! Make him breathe!”
“I can’t!”
“Remember what I told you, I’m sure you know what to do.” And he sat there, trying whatever he thought would help, looking up every time. But he didn’t get his teacher’s approval. After five minutes she shoke her head.
“Never mind, Alex. Mr Dummy would be long dead by now. Lucky it’s not a living person.”
“No! Wait! Give me more time, I can do it!”
“You’ve had your time. You weren’t able to save him.” She walked away.
“No! Please wait!”
“No!” He yelled. He managed to get up and sit on the ground. From the corner of his eye he saw some shocked cops.
“Well what the hell are you for! Call an ambulance, for god’s sake!” One of them nodded and got his cellphone out of his pocket. Alex concentrated on Val. He put his hand under her head, and then removed it again. “Come on, think,” he mumbled. He rubbed his dirty forehead, waiting for the memories to come. He concentrated, and it was as if he was in class again, listening to his teacher. He breathed in, and, hearing her instructions in his head, he did everything in his power to bring Val back. Far away he could hear the ambulance coming.
He turned his head to see how close it was, when he heard someone gasp next to him. Val opened her eyes, and started to cough. Alex noted she coughed up blood. How seriously were her internal wounds?
“Val, can you hear me?” She blinked a few times.
“Yes.” Her voice was weak.
“Can you tell me who you are and what happened?”
“I’m Valentina Johnson and I was being chased by the police.” Her eyes widened. “O god. The car! The tree!” Good. At least her brains were OK, as far as he could judge. The ambulance arrived.
Doctors and nurses were suddenly all around him, and he stepped back, letting them put Val into the ambulance. They closed the doors again, and left for the hospital. They drove fast, and just seconds later Alex wasn’t able to see them anymore. He let himself fall on the grass, closing his eyes.
KatrinaandTiff:
Hey peoples! Well, I got some good news and some bad news.
The good news is that I think that the story is good so far.
The bad news is that I will be here next week, but most likely I won't be here that week after.
P.S. I missed 2 chapters!I missed a lot!Hey, Kate, do me a favor and email me the updates please. You will get a PM here soon on where to email the updates to.
I am not allowed to go on Insimenator at home. So, if anybody wonders, there is the answer by the way.
ktggoodnight:
i am loving this story kat! your are amazing with all your twists and turns- i cant believe he let val go! and that he was saving her!
but now shes with the police ....
xgreydovex:
yesssss! the sound of updates to come is music to my ears. :)
hmm...very interesting...not sure what to think at the moment. It looks like hes letting something get in the way of his duties...budding feelings perhaps? ^.^
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