Ignorance {3.3.08}
JennyLynn:
Yay! New story, hopefully I'll finish this one D: So sorry. Anyways, here we go...
???: Help! someone!
???: There's no one, I need someone!!! HELP!
???: Someone....anyone...
???: What the....?
???: A woman?
???: Door, door, door, please let someone be home!
???: Come on! ANSWER!
???: 11 o'clock, who the hell's at our door this time of night?
???: PLEASE! OH MY GOSH, PLEASE LET ME IN! HE'S AFTER ME!
???: Calm down! Okay, okay, come in!
???: Thank you, thank you...
???: I feel like I'm gonna be sick...
???: Oh no. NATHAN! GET IN HERE NOW!!!!!
Nathan: What Jillian!?
Jillian: She just fell over, I think she's unconscious. OH MY GOD! WHAT IF SHE'S DEAD!?
Nathan: Compose yourself! She's breathing. I'll carry her upstairs.
Jillian: What are we gonna do?
Nathan: I don't know, we'll figure it out when she wakes up...
Hopefully you've enjoed it so far. I know it's short but I'm just starting up the Sims again.
-Jenny
Stelio Kontos:
Not bad, not bad. *smells potential*
While I have a tendency to describe everything, you let the pictures tell the story. That gets a "PROPS" sign from me.
*hangs a "PROPS" sign in the topic*
xgreydovex:
i really like it so far, theres a lot of options and ways the plot could go.
JennyLynn:
SecretAgentZero: yay potential :] I planned the beginning to be more about the pictures. Next update will have MUCH text to read :D
xgreydovex: glad that you like it :]
Astral Faery:
Sounds pretty promising so far!
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