Just One Night...Chapter 3 added!
mustlovenicole:
This is my first story so take it easy guys and gals!
Chapter 1
Its funny how one night can change your whole life. Everything you ever imagined you would be can change in one moment. One in-delibrate moment. One action can change it all.
But I'm getting ahead fo myself, lets start at the beggining...
Kyle and I met in grade 10. We had went to a public school in downtown Pleasantview for our whole lives but met by chance when we took the same advanced math class that year. Soon we were in love but our parents didn't really approve. My mom is a laywer and Kyle's dad a hard-souled businessman who gave Kyle everything he wanted except love. We put up with our parents until we garduated. The summer after grade 12 Kyle and I saved all the money we could and got our own apartment.
It was beautiful. Kyle took a picture of me, Brooke, standing in the kitchen.
And then I took a picture of him.
We were both so happy. We both had fulltime jobs and made enough to pay for the apartment.
This was the first time Kyle and I had spent alot of time together. It only made us closer. I loved Kyle more than anything and he loved me right back.
Our friends decribed us as the perfect couple. Always on time for work and very careful. This was all about to change with just one night.
Cluedo:
I don't know where this story is going and it's interesting alright, but they must have some really damn good part-time jobs to be able to afford an apartment. Speaking of which, Grade 10 and 11? What kind of parents would let their kids move out on their own so young!? Especially before school is done. I don't think too many parents would allow that, no matter how rich they are.
This should be interesting though.
JennyLynn:
I think it's off to a good start ;]
Difficult to start a story though, eh?
For me anyways D:
continue please! :D
mustlovenicole:
I think I will edit the first of the story to make it more realistic. Maybe after grade 12, and they got full-time jobs. What do you think? Thanks for the positive comments though Quak-Quak.
EDIT: I HAVE CHANGED A FEW MINOR DETAILS IN THE BEGINNING TO MAKE IT MORE REALISTIC, CLUEDO. I HOPE IT IS BETTER NOW.
Astral Faery:
Off to a pretty good start. I like the suspense of 'just one night' and look forward to seeing what happened.
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