Fight for it-Chapter 9 posted

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Devomuffins:
I wrote this one fast, the next will be much more descritive.

Devomuffins:
Things began to look up for Rachel. She was overcoming her cancer, and the docters had started talking about the possibility of her going home for a while. She had also begun to speak to the other children in the ward, and soon found they could relate on many things.



Rachel and Nikki became good friends and cheered each other up when treament was at it's worst. But unfortunetly the joyful moments were just calm before a storm.

  Rachel walked over to her bed, tired and frustrated by a shooting pain in the back of her neck. She sat on her bed and told herself it would fade before lunch.



The pain, instead of fading was still there after lunch and had worsened to the point where she clutched her neck and began to cry.



Nikki rushed over to help her. "Are you alright?" She sounded very worried.
 "I'm fine." Rachel lied. She wanted so much to go home and was not about to let anything get in the way.



Nikki did not look convinced. "Maybe you should lie down." Nikki's voice was firm. Rachel was not about to be pushed around. "Look I-" Dizziness overpowered her filling her head, she hit the floor and everything went dark.

Stelio Kontos:
Suspense, thy name is SecretAgentZero!

Hidden~Secret:
I love this story.Please continue it is very interesting.

Astral Faery:
Aw, heartwrenching.  Poor little thing.  I hope she'll be okay.

This is a nice story so far.  I like her jammies, too!  :)

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