Fairvalley ~ Episode 5: Love Letters (REAL EPISODE NOW ;D)
steelguy:
Hmmm...
Not sure I'd call it scary yet. Unnerving dreams about schoolmate... we've all been there. Creepy mindreading schoolmate of the same sex is a bit new, but still...
Hopefully find more about the mysterious experiments and stuff soon.
computer2much:
well the whole mindreading part was just an element of the dream. as for the science crap...i'd like to develop the characters a little more first. idk.
computer2much:
even though i know people aren't readin' mah stories, it amuses me. so imunna keep writing. and uhh, sorry (if there is anyone that follows) for not posting. final exams + writer's block = not post.
Astral Faery:
You must have started this story when my internet was down, or I would have been reading. But, I started tonight, and I really like it! It's full of interesting elements that have my curiosity piqued. Your writing is solid, flows well, and is enjoyable to read. I laughed when you said that one picture didn't quite work. Sometimes it's very hard to get your 'actors' to keep their cues, eh? I have some trouble with that, too. I would love for you to continue and will try to keep following.
computer2much:
haha thanks. yeah, i think i've got a good idea of what i want to do. I should have the episode finished by tonight.
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