MiM / DoG / HoS - Chapter 10 of third part op.
PegasusDiana:
Now you have me making lists. lol This is how I'm leaning, but not sure just yet.
Eben?
Remember?
Gideon?
Shadow will die saving Seth
Seth will die saving Kane
Cyan?
Kane will feel responsible and die saving Chickpea
Chickpea remaining survivor.
I love this idea! This is going to be a lot of fun even without a prize. I can't wait to see what everyone thinks, how our idea's differ on how the story will go.
LadyAzmodan:
For the the fun of it... you do have something right. ;)
I planned on typing up the next chapter when my son naps. :smile:
Oh man i totally forgot to say that the CHARACTER post has been updated!!
PegasusDiana:
I'm going to join Live Journal so I can post comments over there. I added your site directly to my links.
Astral Faery:
I spent my whole morning reading your story, Lady. It's fascinating, and I couldn't stop, lol. You're a great writer - good characterization, great storyline, each person is individual and you do a fantastic job at backstory so we get to know them. Very well done. I'm sad already that most of them will die, lol, because you make it very easy to attach to them all. I think Seth is my favorite character - he has so much going on in his life, many things to sympathize with - but I don't know all the characters, yet, so that could change. Cyan is quite interesting - very manipulative, knows how to get what she wants. I love her beautiful dark eyes.
You also do a good job at building suspense in that creepy cabin. I can't wait to see what happens next!
LadyAzmodan:
@ PegasusDiana - Thank you! and thats great! Livejournal is however a complicated place, allso a great community :)
@Astral Fairy - Wow, thanks! That was really, really sweet of you. I know those black eyes are from Zombie Jill, on MTS2, and well i dont really have a favorite character in that story, i like them all to some extend. While i do have a storyline, some stuff change sometimes because i let my sims have free will, and they sometimes do silly things that fits perfectly into the story, so in reality they are better storytellers than me *grins*
Strangers...
Note: This is half the chapter that i shot and planned, but since the chapter was only half done, and i am really busy these days, i decided that half was better than nothing. This is why this chapter ends pretty funky! And this also means that you do not need to think about the death bet until chapter 12, not 11 as i said before. :)
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