Should I Make This Story or not? its called Simuna Beach: The Real SC (Sim county)
gina942:
lol shes his daughter & i have like zero experience with doctors hehe & i type really fast so i have wayy too many typos lol, everytime i try to toggle my plumbbobs they dont go & the headlines or whatever their called.
Charamei:
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lol shes his daughter & i have like zero experience with doctors
Patient confidentiality extends to not talking to immediate family about it. That's all you really need to know ;)
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hehe & i type really fast so i have wayy too many typos lol,
So, er... proofread?
You'd be amazed at how much more mature and intelligent you come off as to other people online if you use correct spelling and grammar.
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everytime i try to toggle my plumbbobs they dont go & the headlines or whatever their called.
Ah... do you not have any post-NL expansions? In that case, never mind :)
cypherathos:
Another suggestion would be to try not to write something in script form. Readers want to see the emotion. They want to feel it, and just taking screenshots from the sims is not complete. For me it just gives the readers what the characters are supposed to look like. You can't expect sim Paris Hilton to show anger or anything realistic, because they are sims.
gina942:
meh im not a very good writer lmfao XP.
I will try to spell stuff right :)
do you guys know a good story thats written in the way you are talking about? just so I can understand what you mean.
& no I have the sims 2 deluxe edition thats the base game & nightlife only :(
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