Notes from Branwen Prologue
Christian10:
My first shot at a Sims 2 story. Tell me what you think :smt106
In these pages I will write the story of my life, I guess I will start off by telling you about me. My name is Branwen DiCaprio, I was born and raised here in Branwen Ridge, haha I know what your thinking, but I find it quite fascinating to be named after a city.
My parents are Miguel and Veronica DiCaprio. Two of the richest sims in this entire city. But just remember...money isn't everything.
My father is a lawyer, I don't get to see him much because he's never home. He's always busy with a case.
To me my family seemed perfect. Though my father wasn't around much, I cherished the moments when he was.
However it all went down hill after the disappearance of my older twin sisters Ashley and Ashlyn.
Ashley asked my mom to go to this club that had just opened up downtown called P.U.R.E when my mother said no she freaked and they got into a heated argument.
My mom had to work that night, and while she was gone Ashley snuck out. Ashlyn tried to convince her to stay but she wouldn't listen. So she decided to go with her. They called and taxi...and they were off, that was the last time anyone had seen or heard anything from them. It's been a year now and their disappearance has took a toll on everyone.
Mom soaks up all her pain by constantly drinking until she's passed out on the floor.
Dad throws himself into his job, he's only home 3-4 days a week and even when he's home he just goes straight to his room.
Mom and dad are always fighting now. I'm afraid they might get a divorce one day, I try to make them happy and sometimes it works but not all the time. I don't want them to divorce, our family is torn enough.
This here is my best friend Stacey Gomez
We met each other while attending the same daycare. We would always share our toys with each other, and babble to one another as if we had our own language that only we could understand.
Stacey and I are like sisters, we're inseparable, two peas in a pod. She's the other half of my being. Without her I would be nothing.
But last school year Stacey had to be rushed to the hospital, in the middle of class she passed out.
I was mad, confused, sad and helpless all at the same time. There was nothing I could do to help my poor friend.
She was later diagnosed with Leukemia, she has to stay in the hospital and she can't have many visits. The last time I saw her she wasn't looking too well and all her hair had fallen out.
She seemed so weak and tired, you could hear it in her voice. I couldn't bare to see her that way and I almost cried.
Well I guess that ends the first page of my diary, I need to go catch up on my homework. Goodbye for now.
Sincerely
Branwen
Stelio Kontos:
I read what you've got so far, and it's pretty damn good.
But, here's 2 small cheats for pic taking (Yeah, I do tend to be nitpicky about plumbbobs and thought bubbles appearing in story pics):
-showheadlines off
-PlumbBobToggle off
Astral Faery:
Charming and intriguing so far. Branwen is a startingly beautiful little girl, and she sure has a rough life. How awful for her to have so many tragic things happen in her short life. I liked this so far and hope there's more. I like the name Branwen, too. I've considered using that in my legacy sometime.
Christian10:
Quote from: SecretAgentZero;1290683
I read what you've got so far, and it's pretty damn good.
But, here's 2 small cheats for pic taking (Yeah, I do tend to be nitpicky about plumbbobs and thought bubbles appearing in story pics):
-showheadlines off
-PlumbBobToggle off
Thanks alot, I forgot about these cheat codes though i've heard of them before. I change it in my next update. If you find any other mistakes feel free to tell me :happy8:
lilbossy'11:
haha! i like it pissy chrissy!.....damn stacey toe down!
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